|Reviews for City of Devils|
| SkullszEyes chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
That was awesome! :D Lol
| Lil Tanuki chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
Another truly lovely work, Axel Angst at it's best. The imagery is wonderful, every moment played perfectly in my empty head as I read and reread this. Axel's denial and pain portrayed so clearly and expressively that it catches you heart and makes it bleed for him.
| estrellaz chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
AWW! Axel! -hugs him-
Sweet oneshot though rather short.
Still, touched me enuff. Axel's so pitiful.
Write more Akuroku's like this.
| Constance Greene chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
This is the best Axel angsting story I've read
You da master.
And of course I complimented it nicely. Who wouldn't? xDD
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
wow so deppressing reminds me of me wow
| QueenStrata chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
Crap, I don't even know what to say right now. I've been so out of it all week, but you wrote this so I had to read it and um. Yeah. I particularly liked the phrase "sin whispering around him"; it's very fitting for Axel.
...I would now proceed to babble, but my brain isn't quite working today, so let's just say that I enjoyed it and it was sad and D: Yeah. God, my eloquence ASTOUNDS me.
| solonggoodbye chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
That was really, really good! I envy your descriptive talents, since thats the bit I struggle most with when I'm writing anything. I really enjoyed reading this, even if it made me a bit ";_;!"
| silver moon droplet chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
ROXAS BREAK ME HEART.
you're welcome btw if you ever write something and are all i dun wanna post it well maybe - because dood ALL YOUR WORKS ARE FUCKING WORTH IT KAY.
so this took another ten years off mah life.
it was pur ANGSTY LOVE.
| Sasuke-N-Sakura4Ever chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
So beautiful. Great detail as always. Poor Axel *sniffles* I thought that part in KH2 was kinda adorable when he said he would miss Roxas. I'm so happy you wrote another Akuroku. Keep up the good work _