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McGem chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
this is good
TBD chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
Great fic. I think you really nailed everyone's emotions and I loved the changing POV :)
mabelreid chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
I like this piece, especially the changing POV. You don't tell us who is speaking, but I always knew who it was.

The tone of this is just right, and realistic for the plot. I am glad that it ended as it did, not all sunshine and bunnies if you know what I mean, but they will be stronger for the conflict.

I hope you will write more stories for DL.

I like the french saying, so true to the situation. Brava
ReJo chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
Good job. You can't hide being in love; it always shows through.
DAnNSfreak chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
Nicely written. It was a good idea for a story. Love the last line. :-)
notesofwimsey chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
Nice job! I like the 'spinning' feeling of the changing POVs as everyone tries to deal with what happened. It is a different situation than most people write about, and I think you deal with the emotions and consequences well.

Each person speaking sounds unique, which is really good in such a short piece. Can't wait to see what you do next!