Reviews for Forbidden Child
CaitiAthena chapter 22 . 6/30
yes!
CaitiAthena chapter 18 . 6/29
maybe you need to learn how to shut up Maes and maybe you wouldn't be hit as much
CaitiAthena chapter 12 . 6/29
even when he's only two years old Ed can still sas back
CaitiAthena chapter 5 . 6/26
oh Riza, that is just... REALLY FREAKING CUTE, CAN I HAVE A COPY?!
Taranodongirl1 chapter 30 . 10/18/2016
PLEASE CONTINUE! I KNOW THAT ITS BEEN YEARS BUT YOU CAN'T JUST STOP AT THAT!
Numbkid chapter 30 . 9/25/2016
Omg no. Aww, it's too bad you haven't updated. It was a real good read. Hope you can finish it!
Tairulz chapter 30 . 9/16/2016
This is a great story, I enjoyed it from start to finish! :)
Guest chapter 30 . 4/29/2015
ths story is really cool
i love the way that ed and roy have bonded throughout the whole story
please continue this.
its really really good
Carcrash87 chapter 18 . 8/23/2014
Lol I love this . I the tiny miniskirts line played by ed truly amazing.:D
random guest chapter 30 . 10/5/2013
please im begging you finish it please *gets on knees with puppy dog eyes* please i want to know what happens next
Lxloothor chapter 20 . 9/30/2013
NUUUUU THE SUSPENSE!
Kisa167 chapter 30 . 9/17/2013
This is a pretty decent story you have here. You could work on the grammar a bit more though.
When is the next chapter?

kisa
Kisa167 chapter 16 . 9/15/2013
good stuff
Mimi chapter 30 . 1/30/2013
Hey,
I really like this! It is very well written! If you don't mind me suggesting a beta for your work, you know, for the slight grammar errors?
Aleca chapter 30 . 4/8/2012
Don't give up! I need to know what happens! P,eeaasses

This story is amazing!
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