Reviews for GUNSMOKE Shattered a Nitro ATC story
Dakota Kid chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
Wow! I just watched this episode this weekend and yeah Kitty's face at the end is pretty emotional. Way to go writing this.
mahc chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
Great stream of consciousness piece with everything Kitty is thinking in that scene at the end of "Nitro!" I love how she keeps making herself have faith that he is okay. And I love how you've keyed on HER reactions. The end of that episode seems to be focused on what happens to David Canary (forgot his character's name). But KITTY would be worried about Matt and what would happen if he got there at the wrong time. Great job!
BigMommaT chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
This story fit perfectly with the tense scene in the bar surrounding the explosion. Until reading your story, I hadn't really fully considered that Kitty would be thinking that Matt might also be hurt or killed. (I guess because as viewers we could see that he was okay.) But this story is a perfect portrayal of what she would think, feel and do. I love the poetic rhythm that the repeating of "Matt!. . ." creates. Nicely done.