|Reviews for Ardent Desire|
| CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
There is barely enough here to grasp any sort of meaning. That is quite a twist I will admit and its well written...but it doesnt quite hint at enough to get any real idea of what its about. Could you explain your reasoning behind this one please?
I mean he suddenly doesnt know who sam is (i'm presuming that the pov is off sam?) even though Ironhide clearly calls him that. Or is it that he's losing his memory, he's lost memory of Bee if that little italic sentence is anything to go by apparently but i cant say i get it.
| XxYourXxDisasterXx chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
um... whats wrong with sam? why is he made of metal and wires? WHAT HAPPENED TO BEE? and is this sorry DONE? it says it is.. but.. you wouldn't end the story like that would you? WOULD YOU? *panics*
| Psychic-Ghost chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
My only problem was that it was too short. I'd love to see you expand this into a larger fic.
| Lola Hard chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
Wow... A twist it really is. So strange and sad. How could he forget :(