Nice story. :). Cute ending. Anything with L/M makes me happy. Thanks for sharing.

This was a very well written story. I enjoyed the ride, and it felt like a Star Wars story. Thank you for this adventure! God Bless!

Well done. I enjoyed your story immensely.

I enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing!

Really enjoyed this story. The pace was excellent, the adventure, i could totally imagine this being published as one of the "official" expanded universe books. Really good.
Loved Luke and Mara interactions here, i always wanted to read more of their married adventures. And this story provided this to me. thank you for writing this!

I don't often review any more, but i just felt i had to complement your portrayal of Luke and Mara and their relationship. I really enjoyed this.

It's an amazing story. :) I like the plot, the characters, the OCs, the writing styles, the back and forth and underlying happenings, etc. It was fun to read. The right mix of inter-character relations and action and Jedi-hard choices. I'd love to read more from you.

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I just want to say that I'm so glad this is on FF.N, because I first encountered this story on TF.N's Fan Fiction Archive and am so bummed that this site seems to have gone down now. This is one of my classic, all-time favorite L/M fics, and I consider this on the level of profic as far as personal canon. Thanks so much for writing it and doing such a fantastic job. [/insert gleeful, squeeing applause here]

I loved it very much and also Pace's personality with Luke during their sickness. I liked the way you write those two.

Continue your good job!...

Hurray for happy, looking-into-the future, well-written endings! Love, love, LOVE this story! AWEsome! Loved every word of it! The dialogue between Luke and Mara was perfect! So many stories can't get the Luke/Mara relatonship right but you portrayed them very, very nicely. All the characters for that matter. You are a great writer! I be keeping an eye, or even two, on your other story. Keep up the amazing writing!

LOVE this story! This chapter made me laugh out loud! That was awesome! Leia : "He kissed me...he kissed me on the mouth" LOL Awesome job! You've got me hooked! :D

This story is fantastic! It's actually better than some of the books. Congratulations!

I decided to read "The Dividing Chapter" for a second time as I enjoyed it so much the last go-around. First, though, I went to your homepage, found, then read your second story "Luke Skywalker and the Outer Rim Profiteer". That was freaking hilarious! So well written-and some good 'ole Skywalker saber action. I loved it. To others that haven't gone to Niralle's homepage, I certainly recommend that you do & enjoy her second story.

Thoroughly enjoyed your story. It's very well written and could have been published as one of the SW novels. Thank you!

Loved the story. It had good characterization, good plot and some romance thrown in. Thanks for sharing.