Reviews for The Price of the Future
Guest chapter 8 . 6/21
Awww, poor Kakashi. Now he's going to end up hearing half the conversation at a time...lovely chapter as always! :)
Guest chapter 7 . 6/21
Awww, I love their friendship. :) Amazing chapter!
Guest chapter 6 . 6/21
Well, that...might have been a mistake on Naruto's part, honestly. I know why he was angry. But now Kakashi will be suspicious...
Guest chapter 5 . 6/21
Awesome chapter! :)
Guest chapter 4 . 6/21
Oopsies, that isn't good for Gaara. Yikes - I hope they're able to fix it in time...
Guest chapter 3 . 6/21
Orochimaru for Naruto and Madara for Sasuke? That's who I'd guess...great chapter! :)
Guest chapter 2 . 6/21
Ooh, Kakashi is going to hate his new hair color. Awesome chapter! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 6/21
Yay, more time travel! I'm looking forward to reading this. :)
Jc11o chapter 24 . 2/24
Yes you kill a lot characters but is good
Motherofthehorde chapter 32 . 12/19/2016
Sigh...
miss this one.
Good story...sorry it wasn,t finished...
Thanks for writting.
Motherofthehorde
Jayls chapter 32 . 10/13/2016
Cool thanks for writing this
Brenda992 chapter 32 . 8/28/2016
Six years is a long time . So please tell me you haven't give-up . By the way awesome story .
Rose chapter 32 . 6/8/2016
Make Naruto more flirty with Sasuke? :P that might work having them argue and end up with a kiss? or just make Naruto make Sasuke power 'everything he dose he has to do it with me?' but yes good luck with this story.
chesshyrecat chapter 32 . 1/11/2016
Hello! I'm very familiar with the desire to scrap and start again, and commend you for going through with it. As for feedback, I love the premise of this story, but its very cartoonish. Try to give more thought to rational responses, think about those characters and their life experiences. No matter what, people find it hard to be scared of kids. Also, people's personalities don't just disappear with a snap of your fingers and the right teacher. Gaara also feels strange, he's hard to pin down. He doesn't really give a shit about anyone he doesn't truly care about, take that and build from there. Think about the behaviours of Naruto and Sasuke- try and keep in mind that these are traumatized ware veterans, and see where that brings you. Then remember that the older generation of shinobi is a bunch of better adjusted war vets.
Also- I know it's tempting to sprinkle random japanese words into your story, but when it comes down to it, if it isn't a jutsu name, an honorific, or something specifically meaningful, it's just weird and disruptive. This whole "kuso" thing makes sentences feel weird, and it takes time to process what you're trying to say. This is based on a japanese story, but this is in english.

All this is not to say this isn't a good story! I found it funny, and it's awesome that you're writing and improving. Good luck with your rewrite!
LeafTwin1 chapter 32 . 9/30/2015
This was awesome! I love how things are coming along. I am wondering what Kyuu did to the office and I am happy that Jiji was pissed. I absolutely love this story. It's a brilliant read. I love how they're training them and building confidence and alliances and wanting to prevent what happens in the future. This whole story, really, is awesome. I am so so happy my twin sent this to me. I really hope you will update this even as you're rewriting it (thanking not deleting this (fingers crossed and knocked on wood) because it's wonderful and would be a story tragedy if it was deleted) because it's just so entertaining and I wish it was animated because I'd watch it over and over (though I'll probably read it over and over as it one of my favorites, if not my favorite, Naruto story, and I've read a lot). You're a most brilliant and wonderful and fantastic author and writer. Cheers and ta! This is such a brilliant story.
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