Reviews for The Price of the Future
SongoftheDarquePhoenix chapter 12 . 9/14/2007
X_x Thats an aweful place to leave... but cliffies bring in reveiws, what can I say? I do it all the time...

Please, update SOON! This is... -chibi eyes-
Havock chapter 12 . 9/14/2007
nice story
obsidian-fox chapter 12 . 9/14/2007
It seems your Naruto makes an awful lot of stupid, Gennin-level mistakes for an ex-Hokage.
HoshitheHorse chapter 12 . 9/14/2007
OMG!...that is all I can say...
kokoro chapter 12 . 9/14/2007
oh dear. i dunno whether i should threated death upon you if you really did kill naruto... or if i should just sit back and wait.. haha well. good chapter! update soon! the death threats shall come when they may xD
VampireJazzy chapter 12 . 9/14/2007
Ah! -bits her nail-
Renhi chapter 12 . 9/14/2007
oh god, please don't let naruto die!

he's the MAIN CHARACTER!

no-[hyperventilating]

please oh please let him live

REVIVE HIM!
ChildInMe chapter 11 . 9/13/2007
um, update soon!
Belladonna-Isabella chapter 11 . 9/13/2007
Excellent story! I absolutely LOVE it! You ‘ve done a great job so far with the characters and the plot is very intriguing. I am really looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon plz!
coll33n3rin chapter 11 . 9/13/2007
Excellent as always. The way you get right to the main points without overwhelming readers with pointless rehashing... I absolutely LOVE it! So many times authors have a tendency to treat readers like idiots that aren't able to understand what the characters are feeling or don't have a clue what the canon was. You have such a way with getting to the jist of everything. I really admire your style. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for putting your ideas onto "paper" and sharing them with all of us - even if you aren't an avid Naruto fan LOL. Re the email you sent, send me a note and I'll do my best (BTW - Gaito (Guy-toe) should actually be spelled Gato (Gah-toe))
Tama Saga chapter 6 . 9/13/2007
Forcing Sakura into a healer mold...you're kind of treating her like Hinata if you think about it.

Hinata can be a good fighter...

Sakura can be a good healer...

But both of them didn't get that way with someone forcing them into the role.

Neither of them understand the importance of their role...and they're not going to be good at it until they enter a trial by fire which makes them want to improve, forget their weaknesses.
SongoftheDarquePhoenix chapter 11 . 9/13/2007
What an awefull place to leave... atleast you update pretty regularly... unlike someone I know... (-coughsguiltily-)
xtechnicolordreamsx chapter 10 . 9/12/2007
i really, really like this story! 8D

it even distracted me from doing my homework for a while (but that's a good thing.. i guess, so yeah.)

hope you update soon! :)
taintedlegacy chapter 10 . 9/11/2007
Man, I love the fact that Naruto and Sasuke have mental links with one another. Update soon!
Love Squared chapter 10 . 9/11/2007
so... u gonna have pairings? hm? pacticularly sasu/naru? it would be so awsome! it looks like they are already on their way too! hehe. UPDATE SOON! love ur story!
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