Reviews for The Price of the Future
the grey mage chapter 12 . 9/15/2007
i have to read more.

i like the way you are handling the time jump. though i dont like it the way you seem to skim or just skip stuff. its just the important stuff in your story. it would be longer and have more depth if you had just written specifics. but your the author. so yeah.
yinan chapter 12 . 9/15/2007
The story is definitely interesting, but Naruto gets poisoned one too many times don't you think? Trice now, and two times because of Sasuke. It's getting a bit repetitive.
Belladonna-Isabella chapter 12 . 9/15/2007
OMG!How could that happen? Oo!I am still in a state of shock! Sasuke killed Naruto. I clearly wasn't expecting that. Very nice chapter! I look forward to the update :)

Btw why are they so afraid of Gato? I mean even the first time the only reason he got Zabuza was because Kakashi had injured him heavily. I understand that you may need it for your plot but don't overdo it because it isn’t that believable. Gato can be of use to them if they want to stage their deaths(Haku and Zabuza) and not be found out. That is just a friendly advice, one you can ignore if you want :)
SongoftheDarquePhoenix chapter 12 . 9/14/2007
X_x Thats an aweful place to leave... but cliffies bring in reveiws, what can I say? I do it all the time...

Please, update SOON! This is... -chibi eyes-
Havock chapter 12 . 9/14/2007
nice story
obsidian-fox chapter 12 . 9/14/2007
It seems your Naruto makes an awful lot of stupid, Gennin-level mistakes for an ex-Hokage.
HoshitheHorse chapter 12 . 9/14/2007
OMG!...that is all I can say...
kokoro chapter 12 . 9/14/2007
oh dear. i dunno whether i should threated death upon you if you really did kill naruto... or if i should just sit back and wait.. haha well. good chapter! update soon! the death threats shall come when they may xD
VampireJazzy chapter 12 . 9/14/2007
Ah! -bits her nail-
Renhi chapter 12 . 9/14/2007
oh god, please don't let naruto die!

he's the MAIN CHARACTER!

no-[hyperventilating]

please oh please let him live

REVIVE HIM!
ChildInMe chapter 11 . 9/13/2007
um, update soon!
Belladonna-Isabella chapter 11 . 9/13/2007
Excellent story! I absolutely LOVE it! You ‘ve done a great job so far with the characters and the plot is very intriguing. I am really looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon plz!
coll33n3rin chapter 11 . 9/13/2007
Excellent as always. The way you get right to the main points without overwhelming readers with pointless rehashing... I absolutely LOVE it! So many times authors have a tendency to treat readers like idiots that aren't able to understand what the characters are feeling or don't have a clue what the canon was. You have such a way with getting to the jist of everything. I really admire your style. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for putting your ideas onto "paper" and sharing them with all of us - even if you aren't an avid Naruto fan LOL. Re the email you sent, send me a note and I'll do my best (BTW - Gaito (Guy-toe) should actually be spelled Gato (Gah-toe))
Tama Saga chapter 6 . 9/13/2007
Forcing Sakura into a healer mold...you're kind of treating her like Hinata if you think about it.

Hinata can be a good fighter...

Sakura can be a good healer...

But both of them didn't get that way with someone forcing them into the role.

Neither of them understand the importance of their role...and they're not going to be good at it until they enter a trial by fire which makes them want to improve, forget their weaknesses.
SongoftheDarquePhoenix chapter 11 . 9/13/2007
What an awefull place to leave... atleast you update pretty regularly... unlike someone I know... (-coughsguiltily-)
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