Reviews for Air
chickennn chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
aw, that was really cute :)
NeuroticFemale chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
Plus Butch is Luke's old nickname in highschool

And I don't think she is riding him quite yet in this story ;)
Forgotten Relic chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
ah... you're welcome! you know I enjoy being beta! And Crystal not only makes sense, the entire Crystal justification was so very Lorelai, absolutely nailed that one!
gilmoregirlsalwaysforever chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
that was good i hope you write more
Leire chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
I love it! Can you write more chapters please?
Gymtig chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
I like, I like! I thought he name crystal was perfect for a bike.

You wrote the characters perfectly and I just looved the LL banter. How sweet of Luke to get her a Hello Kitty horn and helmet with Hello Kitty stickers on it. It shows that he does care, even if he doesn't seem like it.

I loved the conversations they had and I wish there was this fic added into the episode.

Great job!
Braelyn Rae chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
Excellent beginning!