|Reviews for Red and Rock|
| Itanu chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
This is a very interesting concept. I myself have wondered what Duke Red's thoughts about Rock would be if the man ended up surviving the destruction of the Ziggurat.
Let me say, your spelling and grammar are absolutely awesome. However, I believe that the past-perfect tense of "stare" is "stared", rather than "store". Other than that, though, Good job!
As said before, it is very neat to see fanfictions that look at how a character personally views a situation, so this is an engaging story.
All-in-all, a very nice little oneshot. Great job!
| Kairi Uzeniba chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
Aw, that was so sad. The last sentence didn't make much sense. Is Rock dead, or running away? It was hard to tell. But it was very good. I'll be waiting for more.
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