Reviews for The Last Order
Guest chapter 2 . 10/30
You said ITS inspired by golden Fox yet ITS so similar if you put some stuff like him having a kid at the beginning then it would be more interesting
Curious Reader chapter 1 . 8/1
One has to wonder why, in stories such as this one, Naruto always comes out as helpless at the start. Makes you wonder if his title/infamy is actually well deserved. A high level Shinobi SHOULD always be alert, not to mention they'd most likely choose to live somewhere inconspicuous, especially if its with someone precious. Then there's the fact he let his guard down in front of enemy nin, especially against two unknown who most likely hate him considering where they're from. I know it was needed to get him to Konoha, but I suppose I just dislike how helpless he came off, couldn't you have chosen a different situation to get him there? I mean know disrespect, just curious. Thank you for you're time.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1
Worst story ever his wife dies all because a sound nin and then he doesn't change in personality and then teaches brats I mean come on I would've made him leave the damn village
blondiebaka chapter 12 . 2/5
Your dad
Lick my ass chapter 3 . 2/1
Bad
Guest chapter 4 . 10/11/2015
Yeah u fucked up aye...kinda disappointed coz it was good till you killed the wife and den made him look like a bitch. Waste of time -_-
Guest chapter 3 . 10/11/2015
Wtf?
Guest chapter 2 . 10/11/2015
Was hoping the little teme would get his head kicked in but ok atleast he lost
Guest chapter 2 . 2/4/2015
did you not understand me the first is said screw with the wife and i will kill you pedo duck ass wanabe
Guest chapter 1 . 2/3/2015
you screwed with his wife im just reading this fanfic and iv grown quite fond of her so let me just tell you this do it again and ill kill you
CosmicBeing chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
Well I can tell this is already crap with you having him submit like a bitch to them, you little bitch.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
LOL. At first naruto was all like hating konoha with all his heart then he agrees to go back because his dumb ass wife got held hostage. If he's so fucking strong how come he didn't devise a way to save her instead of chickening out like a little bitch? And after all these years of banishment, he's STILL the councils little bitch. In-fucking-tolerable
XxMJXx chapter 12 . 7/2/2013
I stopped reading this the 3rd chapter. I didn't understand you're writing and everything's all messed up. Ok sorry but the plot makes like no sense
Agato - The Hadou Inari chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Okay fuck this shit to the lowest pits of hell you Canon and Kishimoto worshipping piece of shit!
Guest chapter 3 . 3/6/2013
I can't read any more. While I hate any story where there is a super naruto. I also hate stories where naruto actually has power but won't stand up to a counsel of CIVILIANS and clan heads. Another question. Isnt the hokoge the leader of the entire villige? So why does she bow down to the councel? No where in the naruto universe does it say that it is a democratic government, its actually more of a military dictatorship for the better of the people. Also no other country in naruto allows there respective counsel to tell their kage how to do things. Why would naruto, while not all powerful, let the counsel of a country not his own anymore tell him what to do. I would figure after being banished, he would hold a grudge. Lets not forget the assassination attempt in chapter1. And I don't know about you but if someone put a knife to my wifes neck, chapter1, I would have killed them as soon as thier back was turned. Ok I'm done ranting for now, thanx.
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