Reviews for The Last Order
blondiebaka chapter 12 . 2/5
Your dad
Lick my ass chapter 3 . 2/1
Guest chapter 4 . 10/11/2015
Yeah u fucked up aye...kinda disappointed coz it was good till you killed the wife and den made him look like a bitch. Waste of time -_-
Guest chapter 3 . 10/11/2015
Guest chapter 2 . 10/11/2015
Was hoping the little teme would get his head kicked in but ok atleast he lost
Guest chapter 2 . 2/4/2015
did you not understand me the first is said screw with the wife and i will kill you pedo duck ass wanabe
Guest chapter 1 . 2/3/2015
you screwed with his wife im just reading this fanfic and iv grown quite fond of her so let me just tell you this do it again and ill kill you
CosmicBeing chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
Well I can tell this is already crap with you having him submit like a bitch to them, you little bitch.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
LOL. At first naruto was all like hating konoha with all his heart then he agrees to go back because his dumb ass wife got held hostage. If he's so fucking strong how come he didn't devise a way to save her instead of chickening out like a little bitch? And after all these years of banishment, he's STILL the councils little bitch. In-fucking-tolerable
XxMJXx chapter 12 . 7/2/2013
I stopped reading this the 3rd chapter. I didn't understand you're writing and everything's all messed up. Ok sorry but the plot makes like no sense
Agato - The Hadou Inari chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Okay fuck this shit to the lowest pits of hell you Canon and Kishimoto worshipping piece of shit!
Guest chapter 3 . 3/6/2013
I can't read any more. While I hate any story where there is a super naruto. I also hate stories where naruto actually has power but won't stand up to a counsel of CIVILIANS and clan heads. Another question. Isnt the hokoge the leader of the entire villige? So why does she bow down to the councel? No where in the naruto universe does it say that it is a democratic government, its actually more of a military dictatorship for the better of the people. Also no other country in naruto allows there respective counsel to tell their kage how to do things. Why would naruto, while not all powerful, let the counsel of a country not his own anymore tell him what to do. I would figure after being banished, he would hold a grudge. Lets not forget the assassination attempt in chapter1. And I don't know about you but if someone put a knife to my wifes neck, chapter1, I would have killed them as soon as thier back was turned. Ok I'm done ranting for now, thanx.
TheGrinningAnimal chapter 12 . 6/6/2012
not bad, not bad, bringing in bleach made me face palm and i think naruto and anko should have had a girl instead of a boy but its your fic and your doing pretty damn good so far
anonyme chapter 3 . 1/13/2012
Shit hole seriously its an insult to the work of Nyce456.
Beast-In-The-NorthEast chapter 12 . 10/28/2011
i liked it till you killed Sayuri now i hate it...sorry
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