Reviews for The Last Order
Anonymous chapter 12 . 4/29
You can buff some parts and add a little more.. originality? Anyways it's a good story
my 2 guys chapter 12 . 2/16
that was good keep the chapters coming
TheOmnificentOne chapter 1 . 1/28
Seriously? "Inspired" by Golden Fox? You made an exact poorly written replica
Guest chapter 2 . 10/30/2016
You said ITS inspired by golden Fox yet ITS so similar if you put some stuff like him having a kid at the beginning then it would be more interesting
Curious Reader chapter 1 . 8/1/2016
One has to wonder why, in stories such as this one, Naruto always comes out as helpless at the start. Makes you wonder if his title/infamy is actually well deserved. A high level Shinobi SHOULD always be alert, not to mention they'd most likely choose to live somewhere inconspicuous, especially if its with someone precious. Then there's the fact he let his guard down in front of enemy nin, especially against two unknown who most likely hate him considering where they're from. I know it was needed to get him to Konoha, but I suppose I just dislike how helpless he came off, couldn't you have chosen a different situation to get him there? I mean know disrespect, just curious. Thank you for you're time.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2016
Worst story ever his wife dies all because a sound nin and then he doesn't change in personality and then teaches brats I mean come on I would've made him leave the damn village
blondiebaka chapter 12 . 2/5/2016
Your dad
Lick my ass chapter 3 . 2/1/2016
Guest chapter 4 . 10/11/2015
Yeah u fucked up aye...kinda disappointed coz it was good till you killed the wife and den made him look like a bitch. Waste of time -_-
Guest chapter 3 . 10/11/2015
Guest chapter 2 . 10/11/2015
Was hoping the little teme would get his head kicked in but ok atleast he lost
Guest chapter 2 . 2/4/2015
did you not understand me the first is said screw with the wife and i will kill you pedo duck ass wanabe
Guest chapter 1 . 2/3/2015
you screwed with his wife im just reading this fanfic and iv grown quite fond of her so let me just tell you this do it again and ill kill you
CosmicBeing chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
Well I can tell this is already crap with you having him submit like a bitch to them, you little bitch.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
LOL. At first naruto was all like hating konoha with all his heart then he agrees to go back because his dumb ass wife got held hostage. If he's so fucking strong how come he didn't devise a way to save her instead of chickening out like a little bitch? And after all these years of banishment, he's STILL the councils little bitch. In-fucking-tolerable
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