|Reviews for It's Only Forever|
| notwritten chapter 3 . 9/5/2007
Now this is very interesting chapter. I hope you are going to write more chapters for this story.
| The Amazing Aliano chapter 3 . 9/5/2007
Another good chapter, though I'm getting curious about Ciaran...
Also, the whole David thing? Yeah, it would have been fun, but Jared changes to Jareth so much more easily, no? The majority of fanficcers can't be wrong! ...Right?
| notwritten chapter 2 . 9/3/2007
This is a good chapter. More please.
| The Amazing Aliano chapter 2 . 9/3/2007
It's a good idea, I think this has a lot of potential. Keep it up.
Also, I think David would have been a little obvious, perhaps...?
| yodeladyhoo chapter 2 . 9/3/2007
This is really sweet and terribly loving of Ciaran. I really like his take on paternity. But, now, I have the same question that Jareth has, why did Ciaran choose NOW to pick an heir ? Why Jared/Jareth ? Is there a love of his life that refused to go to the Underground ? Is Ciaran simply tired ?
| Parsley the Lion chapter 2 . 9/3/2007
This was very sweet indeed. I agree, Ciaran is a rather interesting character who would benefit from being developed further. Please update soon.
| AvitarGirl chapter 2 . 9/3/2007
this is interesting. i like the plot. update again soon.
| Parsley the Lion chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
Kids say the funniest things. This is certainly original as far as I'm aware. It was rather short, but it seems like a good, solid idea that could turn out to be interesting. Only time will tell. Please update soon.
| yodeladyhoo chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
How painful is that last question asked my the newly christened Jareth; " Why ? "
| notwritten chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
That was a good chapter. Keep up the good work