|Reviews for Turn Me Loose: A Harry Potter Adventure|
| Hypefull chapter 16 . 9/7
Amazing read! Thank you for making this one of the better authors on this site good work!
| Now Account chapter 16 . 6/28
Damn, what a ride. I really enjoyed it.
The second-person narrative is really immersive.
| basharahammeden chapter 16 . 6/1
Excellent. Though the epilogue could've been better
| omh666 chapter 15 . 5/7
I completely agree with your notes at the end there. Evil people can most certainly feel happiness. Hell, they can even feel love. Maybe Voldemort specifically can't feel love, but... he can feel happiness. And yeah, what are you going to use as leverage in discussions with something that wants to eat your soul, if you have no defense against them doing exactly what they want?
| omh666 chapter 14 . 5/7
I love the ending of this chapter. Over doing the plan from Deathly Hallows. Fantastic idea.
| omh666 chapter 13 . 5/7
Technically speaking, he could have saved Regulus, but his orders were to "leave". He says that a couple times during the story.
| omh666 chapter 12 . 5/7
Aah, the double crossing and back-room deals. Such fun.
| omh666 chapter 11 . 5/7
The poor, poor innocent headgirl. I... can't actually keep a straight face saying that.
| omh666 chapter 10 . 5/7
Well I mean, she kept herself healthy right? A good shag is a good shag.
| omh666 chapter 9 . 5/7
Minutes pass and the sled continues its swift pace. Cushioning charms are applied where needed. Obstacles are banished or vanished out of the way. It brings
a whole new meaning to "dashing through the snow." Someone's coming to town, but the only "jolly fat guy" is a troll looking to make a killing.
I absolutely love this part!
| omh666 chapter 8 . 5/6
Damn ten second troll. This is a fun start to an exciting series of challenges.
| omh666 chapter 7 . 5/6
Far too few people have even heard of Baba Yaga, let alone know anything about her mythos. I love when authors include uncommon myths in their writing. Normally, it results in me having a new research topic, but even when I'm familiar, it is still enjoyable to see something that hasn't been done to death.
| omh666 chapter 6 . 5/6
Aah yes, Harry The Great Wizard... proves his greatness by? halling around a mutated troll.
| omh666 chapter 5 . 5/6
Have you ever thought about becoming a polatition? I think you'd be good at it, if your writing is anything to go by.
| omh666 chapter 4 . 5/6
Aah the games we play. Heh, I love the trick Harry's pulling in this chapter.