Reviews for Turn Me Loose: A Harry Potter Adventure
xvector chapter 4 . 11/25/2014
Kwan is the best OC ever.
BYoshi1993 chapter 16 . 11/24/2014
Two of the best stories that I've ever read.
Silverrain chapter 16 . 11/17/2014
Oh my, I freakin' loved the ending. Great last chapter! Thanks so much!


rat next to him nods in ascent.

I'll show you some of the sites."
Guest chapter 15 . 11/17/2014
Holy fuck! That was an unexpected twist! Well written!


handle the great serpent as best the can
*they can

His face is even less than human than you remember.
*His face is even less human than you remember.
Guest chapter 14 . 11/16/2014
Ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhh! What a cliffie!


next step in you "master plan"
Guest chapter 13 . 11/16/2014
Why wouldn't he use blood wards against Harry? Why has no they fanfiction author I've read caught on to this? Hmmmmmm...

Four typos:


Another two I can't remember that wee in the same paragraph, and

Guest chapter 12 . 11/16/2014
Oh, it's perfect! A little potion payback for the old lust potion raping bastard.
Guest chapter 11 . 11/16/2014
That was low. I also keep wondering when someone will catch on that Dumbledore could have transferred those blood protections to someone else at any point during Harry's childhood.
Guest chapter 10 . 11/16/2014
Yeah, we could all see that coming the moment he laid eyes on Svetlana. The revolt spreading to the UK, too,


Last chapter:

Daemon's are rather scarce

This chapter:

who has be lying
*been lying

"You're time will come,
*Your time

Ahem, with that we welcome back, Mr. Potter.
*Ahem. With that we welcome back Mr. Potter.
Guest chapter 9 . 11/16/2014
Great chapter with only a few minor typos.
Guest chapter 8 . 11/16/2014
Ooh, what now? What now?

Typo: fermenting any civil wars
Guest chapter 7 . 11/16/2014
I almost named him Albus Severus Potter, but that just seemed cruel.

Haha! I love your little digs at that crap epilogue.

get's should be gets

on the fringe of your conscious.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/16/2014
What. Just what. That is just creepy.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/16/2014
Great chapter!
Guest chapter 4 . 11/15/2014
That is a bad ass fucking devious twist. Nicely done, Jim!
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