Reviews for Turn Me Loose: A Harry Potter Adventure
sylvelle chapter 14 . 7/11/2012
And Kreacher brought Regulus to that cave and left him there. As his master requested.
sylvelle chapter 13 . 7/11/2012
Dobby didn't because he was limited he did not want his master to know what he was doing. House elves including Kreacher apparate in and out of Hogwarts all the time and around it, that's how they do their jobs.
sylvelle chapter 10 . 7/11/2012
I wish you hadn't made Fawkes hostile.. I think he knows Dumbledore goes to far.
NaruHinaSometimes chapter 6 . 7/5/2012
love it :D
One Lonely Marauder chapter 16 . 6/8/2012
I have to say it's been a fun ride. I avoided this story for as long as possible, not because I thought it would be bad, but because my friend wanted me ot read it and I have an unnatural ability to sink in to a story and disappear until I finish reading it.

This was no different - I was late for work twice because of it. (this makes me smile btw)

I've found myself re-evaluating the benefits of writing in second person perspective, and I find it very intriguing and may actually use your idea to try writing again (I've been unable to write a story in 3 years)

Considering my inner narrative has always been a mix of 3rd and 2nd person perspective I shouldn't be surprised..

But, I digress, I'm running out of time (as I'm close to being late for work again) but I had to take at least a little bit of time and thank you for this amazing story. You are an amazing author and you can be damn sure when I have money I will be heading towards amazon to check out your original work.

I tip my hat to you (even though I don't wear them) and will leave a better review when I'm not pressed for time.
Chargone chapter 16 . 6/2/2012

And now Harry gets to tell Luna about all the nonsense he had to put up with and things he had to kill to get where he is, yah?

a wonderful ending to a well written story.

... i spent a fair amount of time wanting to both hug and strangle Luna and Harry when they interacted though... could see and understand their problems but also see exactly where they were screwing up and making it all worse. heh. the ending is promising... i do hope it works out for them.

good job :)
Special Spriggy Exorcist chapter 16 . 5/10/2012
An excellent followup to Bungle in the Jungle. I don't think it was quite as good as the first and I think that the final battle was somewhat hard to follow and slightly rushed, but still a great read.

I find it a shame you chose to kill Kwan off, personally I would rather have seen you kill of any of the other major characters but, your story.

I've enjoyed these two stories an awful lot, and I look forward to reading the rest of you stories over the next few weeks. I noticed on your profile that you've written some original works, and if your other stories hook me as much as these, I suspect I shall have to buy them.
RadgarEleding chapter 16 . 5/4/2012
Excellent story. I could write pages about how wonderful and entertaining the journey through your imaginative version of the Harry Potter universe has been, but I will instead simply say that both installments of this tale have made it onto my very short list of favorite stories.

After my 2-day marathon reading these, I'm eagerly looking forward to sinking my teeth into whatever other exciting tales you may have already published.

Lens of Sanity chapter 8 . 5/3/2012
Nicolette; the girl from Chapter Eight who Fleur sends to his room

It's Aimee Beaucourt!

"Aimee Nicolette" ... Man I'm an idiot, I can't believe I never made that connection until now D
Ducks-Go-Aflack chapter 16 . 5/1/2012
Dear God: "Thank you for ibuprofen."

That’s right; I read this story so quickly and with so few breaks that my eyes started hurting.

Thank you, jbern, for making this site a place worth visiting. Your work redemes the hordes of inferior fanfictions.


Lens of Sanity chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Escaping to South America with your new best mate Bill, you avoided the people who wanted to either kill you or use you for their own ends.


Somewhere along the way, you became one curse breaking, Daemon slaying, hidden city discovering, Goblin hating, Inferi destroying, Unforgivable using, don't want to run into you in a dark alley, *badass* Animagus.

You went into that jungle a boy and returned a MAN, with a few notches on your wand and a few more scores to settle.


Lens of Sanity


Yes, Bungle!Harry did just as you say...


Still, this comparison is like a greater accomplishment than Tolkien, Milton, and Robert Jordan


All of them putting unstoppable characters into peerless situations...

...And having the characters they've created be spectacular enough to pull it off...


(JKR never did that)

But you did. Bravo!

scout360pyro chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
NightWithMoon chapter 16 . 4/26/2012
interesting, amusing, and well written... I'm just a bit of a romantic though, so I wish there was less sex and casual relationships...
Cassandra30 chapter 7 . 4/21/2012
Cassandra30 chapter 6 . 4/21/2012
Excellent! That mangy old man!
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