|Reviews for Turn Me Loose: A Harry Potter Adventure|
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/26
I loved both series I wasn't expecting it to be so good but for knelt my favorite authors I said what the hell and gave it a try anyway. It is pity we never heard for you against has been 3 years now
| mab70 chapter 16 . 1/22
This is an incredible story that I am absolutely sure my pitiful little review cannot do justice.
You came up with an amazing number of original characters and places. Believable places, still magical, enough to want to visit, and characters I became so attached to that I was angry when they died and elated at the ones who survived. There was so much action, so many unexpected plot twists, there was never any point of the story where I felt it dragged or spent too much time in details/scene setting.
To correct an error I made in an earlier review, I am thankful BajaB favorited you so I was able to find your work. I am extremely grateful that you continue to update even after you became a professional author. There are other fanfiction works I enjoyed that I can no longer read because the author took down all of their "amateur" work when they started getting paid to write.
Again, thank you very much for sharing your talent.
| Lahmikhara chapter 16 . 1/15
Awesome story! Honestly one of my favorite series on this site must have read the first part 5 times by now, and I'm pretty sure this one will catch up eventually xD
Love your writing and I hope I'll be able to read more of it in the future.
| misherukuro chapter 16 . 1/2
Epic adventure thanks for the read. ,
| CPO Backstreet chapter 6 . 12/29/2014
I have to ask: Have I missed something? How did Snape end up owing Harry a life debt? Is it meant to be an inherited debt from James? Because even if life debts work like that, I'd have thought Snape saving Harry's ass from Quirrell would have evened the score.
| CPO Backstreet chapter 16 . 12/29/2014
I was kind of disappointed when it became clear the characters seemed to be following similar character arcs to the ones in To Fight the Coming Darkness: Ron appearing to betray Harry but really just being too stupid to know what was going on, Hermione betraying Harry but being really sorry afterwards, Ginny being a would-be rapist (although at least that wasn't dwelt on), Dumbledore being on the receiving end of Harry's tantrums... I guess every fiction is shaped by the author's perception of the characters but this felt like "Oh, not that plotline again..." The Harry/Luna plotline seemed to be given disappointingly short shrift in favour of turning Harry into the Pornomancer with his private army of badass fighters killing things, only to get resurrected out of nowhere right at the end as if to justify what category it was in.
Which is probably me being too critical because you should never fault a writer for doing something a bit different, presenting us with Harry who's about as far from being a squeaky clean hero as you can get and an attempt at providing a different sort of villain. I kind of wish you'd killed Bill though, just for the impact.
| Krav chapter 2 . 12/5/2014
As soon as Hermy F. Bags complained that he made it out to be a chore to date her, I instantly saw red. Damn, if I was in that scenario, I would have straight up decked her as soon as that shit came out of her blithering mouth. You're Harry has some serious control over himself, fuck..
| FellowNrd chapter 16 . 12/2/2014
I read the first one years ago and I've finally read this one. Makes the last 36 hours worth it. Keep up all the good work you've been doing, and good like with your original works
| xvector chapter 16 . 11/26/2014
If I had to pick one word for both of your fics, it would be "fulfilling".
The second person writing style is unique and works wonders. I *felt* like Harry, and it is an amazing feat to write so well that we can identify with the protagonist on that level. Your character interactions were wonderful, everything had *substance* to it - this is by far, one of the best fics I have read in a long time. It is truly, truly amazing, and I hope that you continue this.
| xvector chapter 4 . 11/25/2014
Kwan is the best OC ever.
| BYoshi1993 chapter 16 . 11/24/2014
Two of the best stories that I've ever read.
| Silverrain chapter 16 . 11/17/2014
Oh my, I freakin' loved the ending. Great last chapter! Thanks so much!
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| Guest chapter 15 . 11/17/2014
Holy fuck! That was an unexpected twist! Well written!
handle the great serpent as best the can
His face is even less than human than you remember.
*His face is even less human than you remember.
| Guest chapter 14 . 11/16/2014
Ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhh! What a cliffie!
next step in you "master plan"
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/16/2014
Why wouldn't he use blood wards against Harry? Why has no they fanfiction author I've read caught on to this? Hmmmmmm...
Another two I can't remember that wee in the same paragraph, and