Reviews for Turn Me Loose: A Harry Potter Adventure
FellowNrd chapter 16 . 12/2/2014
I read the first one years ago and I've finally read this one. Makes the last 36 hours worth it. Keep up all the good work you've been doing, and good like with your original works
xvector chapter 16 . 11/26/2014
If I had to pick one word for both of your fics, it would be "fulfilling".

The second person writing style is unique and works wonders. I *felt* like Harry, and it is an amazing feat to write so well that we can identify with the protagonist on that level. Your character interactions were wonderful, everything had *substance* to it - this is by far, one of the best fics I have read in a long time. It is truly, truly amazing, and I hope that you continue this.
xvector chapter 4 . 11/25/2014
Kwan is the best OC ever.
BYoshi1993 chapter 16 . 11/24/2014
Two of the best stories that I've ever read.
Silverrain chapter 16 . 11/17/2014
Oh my, I freakin' loved the ending. Great last chapter! Thanks so much!

Typos:

rat next to him nods in ascent.
*assent

I'll show you some of the sites."
*sights
Guest chapter 15 . 11/17/2014
Holy fuck! That was an unexpected twist! Well written!

Typos:

handle the great serpent as best the can
*they can

His face is even less than human than you remember.
*His face is even less human than you remember.
Guest chapter 14 . 11/16/2014
Ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhh! What a cliffie!

Typo:

next step in you "master plan"
*your
Guest chapter 13 . 11/16/2014
Why wouldn't he use blood wards against Harry? Why has no they fanfiction author I've read caught on to this? Hmmmmmm...

Four typos:

Waste/waist

Another two I can't remember that wee in the same paragraph, and

Women/woman
Guest chapter 12 . 11/16/2014
Oh, it's perfect! A little potion payback for the old lust potion raping bastard.
Guest chapter 11 . 11/16/2014
That was low. I also keep wondering when someone will catch on that Dumbledore could have transferred those blood protections to someone else at any point during Harry's childhood.
Guest chapter 10 . 11/16/2014
Yeah, we could all see that coming the moment he laid eyes on Svetlana. The revolt spreading to the UK, too,

Typos:

Last chapter:

Daemon's are rather scarce
*Daemons

This chapter:

who has be lying
*been lying

"You're time will come,
*Your time

Ahem, with that we welcome back, Mr. Potter.
*Ahem. With that we welcome back Mr. Potter.
Guest chapter 9 . 11/16/2014
Great chapter with only a few minor typos.
Guest chapter 8 . 11/16/2014
Ooh, what now? What now?

Typo: fermenting any civil wars
*formenting
Guest chapter 7 . 11/16/2014
I almost named him Albus Severus Potter, but that just seemed cruel.

Haha! I love your little digs at that crap epilogue.

Typos:
get's should be gets

on the fringe of your conscious.
*consciousness
Guest chapter 6 . 11/16/2014
What. Just what. That is just creepy.
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