Reviews for Turn Me Loose: A Harry Potter Adventure
sarah-rose76646 chapter 16 . 5/6/2015
Read Bungle... And Turn. Me... Again.
Still a great read.
I'm specially hoping you'd take up 'The inner eye...' again. It's one of my favourite, right there with Nonjon's Black comedy, BajaB's Hufflepuff Harry and Rors Blot's Make a wish.
I do hope you continue...
bonehead1st chapter 16 . 3/31/2015
These are whiten in the first person
Awsum story's by the way
nanaeleanor chapter 4 . 3/30/2015
I don't understand the Harry/Luna attraction. Even early in their correspondence she was snarky and angsty and revealed to him that the usual Luna traits from canon books were an act. Too bad because that Luna was quietly confident and wise in a zen kinda way. So she's dishonest and she only got worse. In addition, this Luna, even more than many of the characters he's angry with, really let him down when he needed her most. He opened up to her in his letters and was very vulnerable when he shared his fears before battle, but she refused him any comfort. Due to his experiences Harry is now much older than his years, so why the interest in a fifteen year old girl who seems silly and immature.

Also, isn't Harry becoming kind of a dick?
tkepner chapter 16 . 3/7/2015
An excellent finish to your story! Keep writing!
Kurai Ummei chapter 16 . 3/5/2015
Hack was awesome. Kwan was so low key badass. I miss Thunder and Collins still! Geez, what a tale.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2015
I want to cry now that I'm done with both stories :'/
kazers chapter 16 . 2/19/2015
man this was great. kinda hope to see more of this story
Guest chapter 16 . 1/26/2015
I loved both series I wasn't expecting it to be so good but for knelt my favorite authors I said what the hell and gave it a try anyway. It is pity we never heard for you against has been 3 years now

Best wishes
mab70 chapter 16 . 1/22/2015
This is an incredible story that I am absolutely sure my pitiful little review cannot do justice.
You came up with an amazing number of original characters and places. Believable places, still magical, enough to want to visit, and characters I became so attached to that I was angry when they died and elated at the ones who survived. There was so much action, so many unexpected plot twists, there was never any point of the story where I felt it dragged or spent too much time in details/scene setting.
To correct an error I made in an earlier review, I am thankful BajaB favorited you so I was able to find your work. I am extremely grateful that you continue to update even after you became a professional author. There are other fanfiction works I enjoyed that I can no longer read because the author took down all of their "amateur" work when they started getting paid to write.
Again, thank you very much for sharing your talent.
Lahmikhara chapter 16 . 1/15/2015
Awesome story! Honestly one of my favorite series on this site must have read the first part 5 times by now, and I'm pretty sure this one will catch up eventually xD

Love your writing and I hope I'll be able to read more of it in the future.


misherukuro chapter 16 . 1/2/2015
Epic adventure thanks for the read. ,
CPO Backstreet chapter 6 . 12/29/2014
I have to ask: Have I missed something? How did Snape end up owing Harry a life debt? Is it meant to be an inherited debt from James? Because even if life debts work like that, I'd have thought Snape saving Harry's ass from Quirrell would have evened the score.
CPO Backstreet chapter 16 . 12/29/2014
I was kind of disappointed when it became clear the characters seemed to be following similar character arcs to the ones in To Fight the Coming Darkness: Ron appearing to betray Harry but really just being too stupid to know what was going on, Hermione betraying Harry but being really sorry afterwards, Ginny being a would-be rapist (although at least that wasn't dwelt on), Dumbledore being on the receiving end of Harry's tantrums... I guess every fiction is shaped by the author's perception of the characters but this felt like "Oh, not that plotline again..." The Harry/Luna plotline seemed to be given disappointingly short shrift in favour of turning Harry into the Pornomancer with his private army of badass fighters killing things, only to get resurrected out of nowhere right at the end as if to justify what category it was in.

Which is probably me being too critical because you should never fault a writer for doing something a bit different, presenting us with Harry who's about as far from being a squeaky clean hero as you can get and an attempt at providing a different sort of villain. I kind of wish you'd killed Bill though, just for the impact.
Krav chapter 2 . 12/5/2014
As soon as Hermy F. Bags complained that he made it out to be a chore to date her, I instantly saw red. Damn, if I was in that scenario, I would have straight up decked her as soon as that shit came out of her blithering mouth. You're Harry has some serious control over himself, fuck..
FellowNrd chapter 16 . 12/2/2014
I read the first one years ago and I've finally read this one. Makes the last 36 hours worth it. Keep up all the good work you've been doing, and good like with your original works
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