Reviews for Falling
Slashypotterness chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
I found it funny that in your summary you made the comment that it's "Not Slash. That's just dumb." Yet your story is what I would consider "dumb" not to mention very poorly edited.
RemusSiriusJames chapter 1 . 10/2/2007
It was really good, but you switched to third person about halfway through then switched back to first. Other than that, it was really good.
holdraforgo chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
Hi!

I really liked the story, especially the end of it.

I woud like to ask, whether I could translate it into Hungarian?