Reviews for Underdogs
Orionslave chapter 9 . 9/16/2015
Awesome as always! Especially love Trin and Tatsu! :3
FaBbEr0oZ chapter 9 . 11/24/2014
Whoa! Wad Drakken actually INTELLIGENT for a minute there?

only-looking chapter 9 . 6/10/2014
The first sign your evil plan is doomed: "We're not going to kill her yet, we want to crush her spirit first." The second sign: It involves Drakken. On that note, it was kind of frightening to see Drakken being the smart one.

Making Shin fight his mom and the Possibles abuse poor Trin was horrifying. Seeing Bane get his punishment was priceless. Not getting to see it happen was frustrating. I understand why, though. Sometimes, it's better to tell and not show.

Also, it was nice to see Tatsu's awesome and badass side finally, and to see Kim going a little dark. Don't ever piss any of these ladies off.
crazybrit1987 chapter 9 . 11/20/2012
nice to see a darker side of Kim
DarXe chapter 9 . 2/28/2012
That was great. Loved that Booker is Dr. Directors nephew. I cried when the Tweebs hugged Trin and didn't stop til the end of the chapter.
Itachi's apprentice chapter 9 . 4/29/2010
Great work.
drunkwaffles chapter 9 . 5/27/2009
I just finished reading all of your stories in the Pariah Universe and I have to say that this is one of my favorites. I realize that I haven't reviewed your work much, so sorry about that. Your work, and especially this universe imo, deserve a lot of praise. I would love for you to continue this series:)

Miss D.
Scarlet Kurenai chapter 9 . 2/18/2009
I can't believe it took me more than a year before I got around to read this gem..! Sorry about that SL, I've been so wrapped up in ShizNats that I almost forgot about this fandom.. Actually the only Kigo fics left that I still read are the ones you wrote. Gosh, I have missed Pariah U so much.. Especially the banter between Trin and Shego, the adorable relationship between Trin and Tatsu, and now, with a not so new addition that goes by the name, Booker! Finally, Shin's not a 5th wheel anymore, to me he was sort of like that at first, but I'm really glad you created a partner for him and an impossibly adorable one at that. *big grin*

Well I hope this Phariah Universe doesn't just end here, especially now that you have developed, not only Trin and Shin's character, but also Tatsu's in this story. I know that one measly review does not even begin to compensate for all the hard work you've put in on all of your wonderful stories, but please know that we, your readers, appreciate them and feel so lucky to have an amazing author.

Now on to the next story!

Critter-21 chapter 9 . 2/6/2009
This was a really awesome end for the story. It did raise the question though of what will become of Trin and Tatsu's relationship? will they ever make it formal (like marriage)?
InsaneMagician chapter 9 . 11/25/2008
now you have me intruiged.

and here I thought Tatsu wasn't capable of handling a fight like the Possible sisters. you have to show her abilities girl!

does she spit venom from her mouth?

I might be exagerating but it's still possible. or maybe she attacks like a snake, luring them with her eyes and then striking.

your next story needs to have some of these elements.

I'm also slightly curious about something: when you wrote Cryptic did you already had it planned the extent of Tatsu's abilities. now I respect her more than ever.

great chapter, good closure. it does give us some space to breathe since we can say that Bane won't dare touch Trin again, and that she won't be able to reach him next time.

yay, Trin won't kill someone!
InsaneMagician chapter 8 . 11/25/2008
that was amazing!

great job on Booker! that was really awesome!

quite beautiful!

in the end, the world is small! xD

so I'm guessing that Booker can manage himself, huh? and he was calling Shin, oh my! even going as far as calling him to the harpy's phone! he could even track the phone, for pete's sake!

needless to say, I'm quite impressed. this is defiently my favorite story in this universe.

keep it up, this surprise wasn't expected.

I'm just glad he wasn't a synthodrone

once again, great job. I think maybe the color of the eyes and the hair should have been a clue to this though...
InsaneMagician chapter 7 . 11/25/2008
oh to the heavens and above, that was heart-quenching, it that even exists.

I'm glad Shinichiro arrived just in time to not let Bane see what he had done to Trin. good development, nice goings and I'm sure glad as hell for the timing.

this story is great, my favorite so far from this universe. I really like it. I hope the ending is worth it
InsaneMagician chapter 6 . 11/25/2008
and I thought Shin vs. his mother was bad enough.

now I'm left wondering which is worse, hurting your mother or the love of your life.

hey, if the tweebs and James can't fight, what are they supposed to do?

up till now, great job.
InsaneMagician chapter 5 . 11/25/2008
that's evil! Shin against his mother? how could you possible do that!

I wonder how Trin would have reacted to that.

good ideas, nice devolpment and I'm going for the next chapter.

thank you ever so much for such stories.
InsaneMagician chapter 4 . 11/25/2008
who needs luck when its easier to just get the people who wishes to harm their family?

they must pay for that. I hate that greasy black haired guy. he should leave Trin alone; heavens knows what she'll do as vengance once she learns he's in the middle of it.

hope you included that on this book.

off to read now.

I'm liking the way you're making the plot progress, smoothly and nicely. faving the story, it's worth it.

ps: don't be surprised if I end up faving everything you have written
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