|Reviews for Find me|
| Booboobitxch666 chapter 13 . 3/14/2012
Ahhh At last I can give the review I promised... Even if it has been over a month for which I am greatly sorry... Oh my where to begin? First I love the humanising of Malfoy it is much easier to sympathize with him. I like that there is subtle hinting to something growing between them but it is not the highlight of the story. They may eventually fall in love or even just stop being mortal enemies but the growth in their relationship is paced and gradual not one minute they hate each other and the next their making googoo eyes at each other and declaring undying love. They are just moving past the point of comfort getting to know each other understanding even if they don't really want to, sympathizing with Malfoy when he would rather just hate him. It is so amazing... I love that Malfoy's the only one keeping his head, Harry's freaking out and Malfoy's trying to calm him down... I couldn't stop laughing when he did the whole "Here comes the hippogriff" and shoved bacon into his mouth. Again I love that Harry's confused and not entirely sure what's happening. I am overjoyed that there may be some answers in the next chapter, and hopefully some more questions to replace the answered ones lol I really can't wait to read more. I love that we are so many chapters in and I am still confused as to how it will end it is so unpredictable. Which is always lovely, considering how lacklustre many stories on here are now and days just mindless smut (which for the most part I don't mind) but a storyline is always a great addition to said smut. This is a story which reads like a novel, it's full of suspense makes you laugh, cry, be angry, feel like throwing up, and above all it's interesting and I'm not just saying that. I genuinely look forward to reading it; every time you update I get excited, I dream about it sometimes waking up thinking 'I wonder if she'll update soon?' creepy I know but I am utterly obsessed with this story... I can't wait to see how everything fit's together in the end...
Booboobitxch666 A.K.A Jenny )
P.S Update soon please P
| Mantinas chapter 13 . 2/14/2012
This is really good. I wish you luck.
| xxxwallflowerxxx chapter 13 . 2/12/2012
i cant wait for more of this
| Booboobitxch666 chapter 13 . 2/12/2012
OMFG absolutely amazing damn it all to hell why must I come to this so late at night Gahhhh I promise I will give a proper response tomorrow... For now I will say YAY answers! I 3 answers I can't wait for more... Also I love the sympathetic fell I got from Draco there for Harry's confusion... So much more to say hopefully more will come tomorrow
| Booboobitxch666 chapter 12 . 2/9/2012
OMG that is so amazing I apologize for taking so long my friend life has been difficult as of lately and it's only getting worse but I have some time and will use it to review one of my favourite FF stories... Again you have made my heart pound in my chest, the suspense was simply phenomenal... I am yet again left with a million more questions and I absolutely love it... Why is Luna's magic working but no one else's? is it her cloak and the magic protecting her? What is happening why can't they warm up? Did Malfoy curse them? I loved that Molly was torn between the boys who she would go to first all in all showing her infinitely caring nature, I also forgot that the Malfoy's and Weasley's were related... I loved the irony of the teachers being so on edge about breaking the law... And the use of the heart monitors was brilliant... I loved that Luna shared her protective cloth to help Ron and Hermione with the Wrackspurts... Again I have so much to say but my mind cannot formulate into words what I feel... Amazing as per usual my friend; I cannot wait for the next chapter... Wishing you well
| Booboobitxch666 chapter 12 . 2/5/2012
My dearest Valconbridge, tomorrow I will be giving you a proper review but OMG my heart was pounding in my chest the whole damn time. That was such a wonderfully suspenseful chapter, the climax of this chapter had me gripping my armrest hoping the magic would work... I have much more to say but will finish tomorrow...
| Booboobitxch666 chapter 11 . 2/1/2012
My lovely Valconbridge, my apologies for taking so long to review properly...
I love the idea that Luna isn't as crazy as they all make her out to be and the care and love she has for her friends is very heart warming... Again I will comment on how fantastic it is that you are switching viewpoints between Harry, the teachers, and the students in the school... I felt my heart start pounding as I read, the way you are able to so subtly build suspense; it's simply phenomenal... Sorry I cannot say more about it but my mind will not let me put into words everything I love about this story.
| Booboobitxch666 chapter 11 . 1/22/2012
sorry my dear I will return for a more detailed review soon but I am so busy and sore I wanna cry... Amazing BTW
| Booboobitxch666 chapter 10 . 1/14/2012
Those rotten cowards... I love this chapter it has a wonderful flow I can't wait to see what the properties of the dark magic Draco placed on them has and what it will do to them eventually. Again masterfully done I can't wait to read more
| Booboobitxch666 chapter 9 . 1/13/2012
Sorry cut myself off like I was saying I am grateful for every question you leave floating in my mind... This story is so confusing yet it makes perfect sense I know that was a huge Oxymoron but I can't describe it any other way pure brilliance... Thank you for writing such a wonderful story I look forward to reading more and maybe answering a few of these questions... only to (I hope) be bombarded with a hundred more )
| Booboobitxch666 chapter 9 . 1/13/2012
I'm not too sure what is going on here it is like he's in an alternate universe... One where he and Malfoy live together which makes my heart swell to be honest. Again I am so confused and I know you will give an amazing solution to explain all of this... But for now I am lost...
I loved the mixture of Muggle and Wizarding life through the Play station (the first was definitely my favourite one) and computer... I couldn't help but feel a small surge of anger towards Ron with that whole 'good riddance' bit...
but again the small details that make the whole story are the points that turn it from a story to a piece of literature... The small random thoughts, most of the time in books the thoughts are straight forward the antagonist is thinking one specific thought at a time. But in this he is wondering about a multitude of things the life of the people living there, where is he? Who's home is this? Searching the home using investigative measures to try and figure out what was going on. Regardless of his fear.
I loved that little bit of humour there with the "Sex God" cup lol... I really can't wait to read more this story is so interesting and never fails to leave me with a few conundrums to think about before the next chapter... For instance Does he live there with Malfoy? Is this some sort of glimpse into the future? Or a fantasy of Malfoy's? What is up with the map? Why can he see so clearly without his glasses? Is it a dream or something he had done to fix them? Ahhh so many questions and I am greatfull
| Booboobitxch666 chapter 8 . 1/7/2012
WOW! I can only imagine how terrifying that would be, to be so confused and not sure if you are awake or dreaming. Not sure whether this is reality or something else... Again you leave me almost speechless with your flow and subtle complexity... Absolutely amazing I can't imagine the horror of thinking you had a bad dream and that it was over and done and then realizing you were still in it... There are so many facets to consider was what he and Malfoy did real? Did he really see and experience all of that? Was it just a dream inside of a dream? What is going to happen next? When will he figure it out? How is he going to escape? Is Malfoy going to explain everything?
All in all pure brilliance, your story makes me think and wonder and guess what is happening. I love that you do not come right out and say He was still dreaming or that he is still trapped in Malfoy's mind I love that he hasn't figured it out yet. This is such a well written story I can't get over it... I can't even explain it is like you have added a human aspect to it that we can relate to not necessarily the situation but the fear and confusion we feel when we do not understand...
You have captured so many emotions and reactions that harmonize with the story so well it is like an orchestra on paper (so to speak) like him feeling sick after the dream I feel that way after I have been scared or saw/read something vastly disturbing or horrible. (I won't lie there have been allot of chapters in here that left me feeling nauseous) Feeling the comfort of the blanket and feeling the safety under the quilt. The random thought that he should try to remember his dream so he can tell Hermione about it later the little thoughts that run through our minds most writers forget them... You don't and it makes a huge difference in the quality of your writing it adds a real life feel to it which like I said before is part of what makes it the most terrifying for me...
Gah I am sure I am rambling and gushing and all that so I apologize but I truly and genuinely can't wait for more... That seems like such a weak statement to express my desire to read more of this captivating story...
P.S I am extremely flattered and honoured that you mentioned me in your authors note *blush* Thank you
| Atticus7497 chapter 8 . 1/7/2012
I excited to find out whats going on!
| Atticus7497 chapter 7 . 1/7/2012
The gradual realisation was brilliant :)
| Atticus7497 chapter 6 . 1/7/2012
this story is eerily perfect in a disturbing way