Reviews for Going Dark |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story! just brilliant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved this fic! Thank you. You were able to balance the good, the bad and the in-between perfectly and I really love a happy ending. :D |
![]() ![]() Love, love, love, love iiiiiit. I finished it and it was awesome. Awesome was all I had. You see, apparently there aren't enough words in the dictionary for me to use. They ran out. Don't worry, I'm gonnat make one: Stupenawsobrilliaamazbueatiffantastic (Stupendous, awesome, brilliant, amazing, bueatiful and fantastic.) Ps, snape was in character too. Ugggggh, how did you keep and twist snape's character at the same moment. Burning the dark mark on dimbles chest was a good idea. Take that dimbles. Karmas a bitch. |
![]() ![]() I'm on chapter 10 and I can only say 1 word. Okay, maybe 2. "BLOODY BRILLIANT". Seriously. Debs, you are a brilliant writer. Your stories are unique. Special. Most fanfics have the same plot. Harry overhears conversation between dimbles and his friends plotting against him, goes to gringotts, finds blocks on his magical core and love potions in his system, gets them removed, finds out he is very powerful and lord of many houses, buys lots of clothes, studys hard, trains to defeat voldy... Bla bla bla(this is the most used plot). But you, nah, your like " hell no, I need something spicy for my stories". I've read countless fanfics ranging from manipulative dimbles, weasel bashing and snarry and I've tried to compare to see how they are different. And... The results were... EVERYTHING. You know, in the series, Severus was very powerful, and If he didn't turn to the light side, he would have been as powerful as voldy and dimbles. Many fanfic writers disregard that and make him a cold, bitter man dependant on voldy or dimbles, living a sad life before falling in love with harry or someone, and then living a happy life after his defeat. You, brought out that streak in him, one which existed and was begging to be brought out. Remember, while in the books, just because snape loved lily and protected harry, doesn't make him good. He deceived voldermort, a very rare achievement. He was a master in dark arts. Oh and let's not forget, he was a death eater. Gonna continue reading, will review later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just started reading this and I really like it so far. However, in chapter 1 it says Harry is 17, but chapter 3 while watching memories it says he's 15. I'm assuming 17 is correct. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! Does Dean end up with Ginny and his baby? Also whatever happened to Harry's invisibility cloak? I know he said all of his stuff got burned but I thought since his map didn't then Hermione and Ron might've kept the map and cloak to use themselves. |
![]() ![]() Ok, when did Ginny die? I thought she left. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm just imagining Flint, Oliver, Vincent and Greg all cooing over Rowena and Draco just standing in the corner with his arms crossed, trying to sneer at the group. Then Ro does some incredibly cute and Draco is fighting back a smile. *whistles* Don't mind me and my imagination. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this story thank you for your hard work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hugs and cuddlesX3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() If Harry doesn't come back, I'm positive that Sevvie would burn more than the world to ashes, and let the flames use the ashes as fuel too... |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... why take the Dumbledore heir? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... I had fun reading this fic X3 Ro seems to be a very interesting character (if she were to be used in a future fic... I doubt that, though)(Putting her in another fic, I mean) Haha, hugs to you! Thanks for completing this one (I've seen some of your abandoned stories, and I always avoid abandoned stories, honestly. I knew I'd get disappointed once I get to the... end... of said story...) I like how you didn't leave any stone unturned (except for that gutting threat? Yeah, I wished Charlie would've done that, but even so) this was a very satisfying read. ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congrats, Sev~~ |