Reviews for Burn War Snapped
chromeknickers chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
This was fantastic. This is what should have happened at the end of the show. :3
Lunchbox413 chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
This is amazing! I'm going to pretend that this really happened since the real ending of the show sucked so badly. :)

Also, your characterization was perfect!
thewafflebitch chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
awesome
177istaken chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
...And this is how you get the two together!

I'm gonna pretend that this really happened )
Miss Lavender Sky chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
Ha, that was so cute! I loved it! Thank you!

:)
Hyde's Bride chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
Omg I really loved this! Great job!
hondagirl chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
Pretty good. Loved the smut and the fight and the shaving of the pornstache. :) Although the gangs reactions were probably the best. Well done here.
Me124 chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
I loved this. You were spot on with the characters, and I could actually see this happening. Heck, I wish it had happened. You did a great job!
AdriDee chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
OMG! That was FREAKIN AWSOME! I LOVEd it. Seriously, one of the BEST one-shots EVER! A million KUDOS!
c00kiefic chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
How did I miss this the first time around? This was hot and wicked and did I mention hot? I can see them reconciling just like this.

Great job.
RegardstoBroadway chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
:lol: This was really awesome, Tammi. Taking all that hate and anger and hurt and chocking it up to pent up sexual frustration and need to be together. We all know that is really why they couldn't get along. :D

I'm putting this in my favorites.
Chrissy91 chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Wow. This was awesome! This is how you fix season 8! Yelling, sex, and shaving the pornstache!

Okay, when I read this line, "“Faster! Harder!” He imitated her breathy cries during sex then smirked down at her incredulous reaction. “Sounds like liking it rough to me.”" My mouth just fell open. I mean, it's not even that sexual, but I just wasn't expecting it. I knew this was going to be smut, but it caught be offguard because they had just been screaming at each other. But, yay for using all that built up tension! And yay for JH smut!

I loved the talk they had after sex. It was really sweet, and we all knew they never really loved Sam/Fez, but it's good to hear them admit it. And aw, she's shaving the pornstache! That would be so hot.

"“They wouldn’t. Right?”" Hell yeah they would! They should all know that! It's like a pattern. Jackie and Hyde hate each other, they yell, they hook up. They should have caught on that if they left them alone together, this would have happened! Haha. The thought of Jackie and Hyde making such a mess is hilarious.

Oh, and this line, "“You guys won’t have to find someplace else to hang out.”" It wasn't a "We're back together." But it was Hyde's way of saying that, and aw, it just sounded so sweet to me.

This was wonderful! I loved it. Great job!
Casper1990 chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Class story! Their name-calling was so funny but the best part of this story was how comically violent it was. You had Jackie smash a lamp and slap Hyde. Such great moments. And the moustache is dead! WOOHOO!
Zenkindoflove chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Oh man! That was fucking awesome! Seriously. This is one of my new favorite post S8 one shots! Not just because it was smutty either but because the way they got together. This situation they are in doesn't necessarily have to be solved with a long ordeal. I honestly believe they would have gotten back together just like this.

I actually found their fight kind of humorous. Jackie throwing the lava lamp and kicking the shit out of his was awesome and I love her fiestiness! It really did serve as excellent foreplay. Everyone just walking out like that was so setting the explosion up. Probably the only reason they hadn't ripped each other's clothes off before was because everyone else was there. They should have known better from the summer before Season 5. If you leave those two alone, they're going to end up doing it. Lol!

I loved it when Hyde teased her about liking it rough. That when I was for sure (well, you know, other than the M rating hehe) that this was going to be smut. And boy, it was a great piece of smut! That was so hot and I loved how you were a little vague with it. The smut was a great way to express the passion but it didn't end up being the central point of this piece.

Their confessions were brilliant and I practically melted in my seat when Hyde said that she could shave his mustache off for him. I can just imagine them goofing around in the bathroom together, being playful with each other like the once were.

One thing I really liked about their reconciliation is when I couple does reunite again, no matter how one sided the situation might have been as far as guilt, people always humble to each other. You wrote their apologies so realistic and once again, I firmly believe that this very way is how they got back together and said they were sorry.

The ending was hysterical! I loved your Kelso. I died when he said, "Doing it Donna!” "God! Try to pay attention.”

I can't say how much I love this. I'll just sound like a broken record, but, I'm definitely adding this to my favorites list and I'll be reading it many more times.

I'll review your lasted chapter of New Day very soon. I've just been so busy these past few days. I'm sorry about that. Be expecting one by tomorrow!
luvcali76 chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Haha! Aw, that was so cute! It's nice to read a light-hearted one-shot again. Even with the yelling and name calling, it was just utterly adorable and sexy. :D Great job!
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