Reviews for Burn War Snapped
GreenAndZen chapter 1 . 9/26/2016
This story was awesome. Loved every line. Even the insults read easily coz it was foreplay. Lol.

It was a little difficult imagining Jackie making out with Pornstache'd Hyde so I put him in the sexy beard instead. :P

Their little conversation after the tryst was perfect. Very few words to put them back where they were destined to be. Hopelessly in love with each other.

Clean-shaven Hyde walks out of his room. Yummy.
"Touch her panties again and you'll have less fingers". Go Hyde! So hot.

"Chalk it up as a casualty of our truce talks". Perfect. Classic Steven Hyde. With that beautiful smirk.

The war was over. And the nightmares to follow. Your writing of the situation with the war metaphor right from the beginning was brilliant. A ;)
TigerintheTARDIS chapter 1 . 10/26/2015
I loved this and will always choose to believe that this was the real ending.
chromeknickers chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
This was fantastic. This is what should have happened at the end of the show. :3
Lunchbox413 chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
This is amazing! I'm going to pretend that this really happened since the real ending of the show sucked so badly. :)

Also, your characterization was perfect!
thewafflebitch chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
177istaken chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
...And this is how you get the two together!

I'm gonna pretend that this really happened )
Miss Lavender Sky chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
Ha, that was so cute! I loved it! Thank you!

Hyde's Bride chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
Omg I really loved this! Great job!
hondagirl chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
Pretty good. Loved the smut and the fight and the shaving of the pornstache. :) Although the gangs reactions were probably the best. Well done here.
Me124 chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
I loved this. You were spot on with the characters, and I could actually see this happening. Heck, I wish it had happened. You did a great job!
AdriDee chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
OMG! That was FREAKIN AWSOME! I LOVEd it. Seriously, one of the BEST one-shots EVER! A million KUDOS!
c00kiefic chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
How did I miss this the first time around? This was hot and wicked and did I mention hot? I can see them reconciling just like this.

Great job.
RegardstoBroadway chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
:lol: This was really awesome, Tammi. Taking all that hate and anger and hurt and chocking it up to pent up sexual frustration and need to be together. We all know that is really why they couldn't get along. :D

I'm putting this in my favorites.
Chrissy91 chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Wow. This was awesome! This is how you fix season 8! Yelling, sex, and shaving the pornstache!

Okay, when I read this line, "“Faster! Harder!” He imitated her breathy cries during sex then smirked down at her incredulous reaction. “Sounds like liking it rough to me.”" My mouth just fell open. I mean, it's not even that sexual, but I just wasn't expecting it. I knew this was going to be smut, but it caught be offguard because they had just been screaming at each other. But, yay for using all that built up tension! And yay for JH smut!

I loved the talk they had after sex. It was really sweet, and we all knew they never really loved Sam/Fez, but it's good to hear them admit it. And aw, she's shaving the pornstache! That would be so hot.

"“They wouldn’t. Right?”" Hell yeah they would! They should all know that! It's like a pattern. Jackie and Hyde hate each other, they yell, they hook up. They should have caught on that if they left them alone together, this would have happened! Haha. The thought of Jackie and Hyde making such a mess is hilarious.

Oh, and this line, "“You guys won’t have to find someplace else to hang out.”" It wasn't a "We're back together." But it was Hyde's way of saying that, and aw, it just sounded so sweet to me.

This was wonderful! I loved it. Great job!
Casper1990 chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Class story! Their name-calling was so funny but the best part of this story was how comically violent it was. You had Jackie smash a lamp and slap Hyde. Such great moments. And the moustache is dead! WOOHOO!
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