|Reviews for Brotherly Love|
| itsi3 chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
Nice one-shot! 3 Boone!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
You do realize they were step-siblings right? Not blood-related, but it is just a one-shot I guess...
| emwritesthings chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Amazing! I just started watching Lost Season 1 for the first time ever, and I just got to the episode where it's time for Boone to let go. Anyways, I'm rambling. Awesome fic. Loved it! :)
| xXxMusicSavedMyLifeXxX chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
| jacks-peapod chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
well, that was very very HOT ;P
At the end it was a bitter aftertaste, but Shannon was alsways a bitch... - poor Boone -.-
| Sidhe chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
This is a well-written story. The storyline is a little out of place with what the storyline in "Hearts and Minds" indicated, but I still like it. Perhaps this would be a little more appropriate for though? Regardless, Boone/Shannon is my favorite pairing so thank you!
| Prepare to be FLAMED Bitch chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
Grammar-wise it isn't too bad; but no worries, I still found Flaming material:
“As Justin released himself, Shannon came back to her senses. It wasn’t Boone tucking his now flaccid member back into his pants and she was now confused. What had just happened to her? What did it all mean? Did she want Boone?”
Okay, what kind of retard would think, just after getting some sex, 'hey, what just happened? Oh, *beep!* Wrong guy here!' No one! Come on, now, THINK! She would have had to been drunk or stoned to think that stupid line; or just plain retarded. And it's clearly obvious she was the latter.
How the hey-hi-hello is she going to be confused? And how did she see one guy and suddenly realize it's another? Is she really stupid or something? Stupid is as stupid was, and stupid will always be! Now I'm thinking this chic has Multiple Personalities Disorder.
Please take this sorry excuse for fanfiction down before I dump Tabasco sauce in my eyes, because it is *that* horrible! If you're going to write a PWP, then at least forewarn your audience so they'll know what to expect.
You're a pathetic author! And your comma usage is thoroughly appalling and either nonexistant at times or completely misused. It can't be *that* hard!
Grow some class and DON'T consider a career in writing, lest I gouge out my eyeballs!
| exitlight chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
| rolloffbed chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Insanely well writen. You have their thoughts and their reactions down cold. I was so into it that I was sad for Boone at the end when Shanon leaves him lying there on the kitchen floor.