|Reviews for Son of Mosquiton|
| Kuroneko13 chapter 3 . 11/2/2010
I'm sorry u have no time to write. I think ur fic is really good. I wonder if u've seen Mosquiton 99. If not. Check youtube. There'r a few episodes on there. I don't think they've its in the US yet.
| satomika chapter 3 . 6/6/2008
i'm gonna hold on to what you just wrote here...
i hope you update soon!
| Vodka112 chapter 3 . 8/29/2007
you did great!
and considering you managing your time in college,
it means you are working hard!
do your best in school and in fanfics!
add another fanfic!
| Shaft Windu chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
dunn dun ddunn ddaaun da unn ddun dope!
Im back Bitch!
| Calico chapter 2 . 12/3/2003
Hey! This is a great story so far! You really have the characters down! I want to read more! Keep up the good writing and please finish this fanfic soon!
| LadyLupin chapter 3 . 3/4/2003
Woohoo! This is an awesome story. You handle Inaho's character extremely well, which is weird to say since she's not even ALIVE in the it's true, when she shows up or is referred to. Heck, you handle all the characters well. (And the comment about those two being -really- Alaho's 'cousins'~ LOL!) Good luck at college and hope you find the time to write more!
| Chippi2la chapter 3 . 1/16/2003
I like this story! Hope that you have the time to add more! I can't wait to graduate from high school but I'm not thrilled about college either.
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| The Late Blake chapter 1 . 12/11/2002
| SnowCalico chapter 1 . 10/31/2002
Yes, punctuation is very important. I'm not sure why you assume that just because I'm not quite strict with it in my stories means that I 'need to learn it'.
While I appreciate your English tips... I don't punctuate properly on purpose. Why? Because I do these things for fun. These are never going to be published.
It seems to me a bit weak just going around to fanfics and telling people to impove punctuation. Tons of spelling errors I can understand. WoRds THat gO LiKe ThIs I can understand. But punctuation? For the love of god girl, it's FAN FICTION. It's crap written on a whim for no reason. For my college English essays, I use perfect punctuation. For fanfics? Hell no.
If you had a critique on the story itself, and what was in it, I would be happy. When you write some lame comment, as if you were just *looking* for something to nitpick about... I just look at you like you're insane. They're fanfics, not War and Peace.
So, in closing... naaaaah, I already know how to use punctuation. I just choose to be lazy about it with something as silly as stories about cartoon characters. When you take yourself to seriously, you tend to go nuts. I'd rather be silly and ave bad punctuation!
| lucidscreamer chapter 1 . 10/30/2002
Please learn how to properly punctuate dialogue.
| Meirelle chapter 3 . 10/20/2002
I started this little thing called college and I'm now sitting in front of a computer at 2:30 AM reading random Mosquiton fics. _ Keep writing. It's very unique.
| jessica chang chapter 3 . 10/16/2002
*mumbling while looking for more of this story*must have more yummy mosquition must have more
* snaps out of it *
um .. when is more of this going to be posted?i really need to read it i love mosquition must have more
thanks and please hurry up and write more
| Tessen Girl chapter 1 . 8/5/2002
*ponders what threats she has to make in order to force you to continue* Hmm... I do know your plight. Remembering to get back to fics you've forgotten about can take a few months, then a few more for you to actually be able to write, then a few more for editing and such... Consider all of that and I'd say... YOU SHOULD BE CONTINUING RIGHT ABOUT NOW! :O
That wasn't very motivating, was it? Oh well, see previous reviews for encouragement. I keep cheking back to see if you've updated yet. I cry every time I see you haven't. ;_; Finish, please?
| Cathrine Bloom chapter 2 . 6/9/2002
I'm also nervous to find out what this evil look on Candy's face is for though...
| Anonymous Quill chapter 2 . 5/28/2002
Hey. Great story! Update soon! I love it