|Reviews for The Black Heir|
| Salazar sophie chapter 1 . 7/25
The first chapter is really good, and I hope the rest of the story follows I'm happy that harry won't be going Hogwarts but maybe in his fourth year he might go there for the Triwizard tournament
| KatieMarrie chapter 67 . 7/22
Holy shit, took me forever and a day to finish your story! This is by far one of the best stories I've had the pleasure reading on here. Thank you for the great story!
| Freya's Doll chapter 67 . 7/10
I don't know how to say this that you wouldn't take it as a negative review but I have to try to make an honest one.
Your writing format and story is really impressive. The story flow, the plot are well-thought and written. As for the main character, Orion/Harry is, might I say, not a complex or complicated one. Personally, he's a terminal case of walking contradiction and a self-righteous hypocrite. No matter what justifications his character made to be proven otherwise, I still see him as such. That's how I see him as I read the fic.
And that is why I am really impressed with you. I hate Harry's character but I love the story as a whole. You wrote him well enough for me to hate him but love how the story goes. Thank you for this fic.
| gamma 96 chapter 21 . 7/8
Harry should also love a girl to produce the heir
| KitkatMoon chapter 67 . 7/6
Wow, amazing story
| Menaphite chapter 1 . 7/3
After reading Twist of Fate, I decided to read this and I can definitely see the vast improvement in your writing of Twist of Fate. Really cool to see an author grow
| m chapter 29 . 6/23
the puppy and kitten got to me :(
| Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 30 . 6/7
in this chapter you have Tipar translating to Prince is incorrect because Tipar in Romanian is pattern. Prinț in Romanian is Prince
Stasia R. Ravenclaw
| Monkey D. Toushiro chapter 64 . 5/24
| Monkey D. Toushiro chapter 63 . 5/24
| Monkey D. Toushiro chapter 61 . 5/24
ugh. the ollivander oblivation thing still bugs me. when will he realize...-_-
| Monkey D. Toushiro chapter 53 . 5/23
aggggh moldy voldy obliviated his suspicions on ollivander and the twin wands SO SUSPICIOUS -_-
WHAT ELSE DID HE OBLIVIATE
| Monkey D. Toushiro chapter 47 . 5/23
waiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit a sec
I THOUGHT SLUGHORN DIED
i'm so happy harry is going to hogwarts (finally!)
| the starrose chapter 67 . 5/23
I've really enjoyed reading this story. I like the character development and your ideas. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel.
| the starrose chapter 1 . 5/13
I really like i so far!