Reviews for The Black Heir
kofirules56 chapter 13 . 2/28
Once again thanks for writing this.

The expression is “bury the hatchet” which is a small axe.
There was another miscue before that but I’ve forgotten the detail.
kofirules56 chapter 12 . 2/28
I’m enjoying this story very much. I read that English is not your first language so please accept my thanks and two small issues, one of which I noticed in an earlier chapter:
The word you mean is PIQUE not “pick” one’s interest. It means to stimulate.

A JIBE is a cutting remark (not a “jib” which is a type of sail)

Please take these small corrections in the kindly spirit they are meant.
HarGrif chapter 10 . 1/13
I do not like Harry being gay! You ought to tell this in your description, it is sad because I like the story so far. too bad your such a candy boy!
Tony Moonstone chapter 58 . 1/10
I'm sorry I can't read your story any longer.
My heart, mind and soul can't stomach it.
Your story was good at the beginning but now it's causing me hurt to witness Orion being a possession and not an equal to Voldemort.
The constant arguing, and the stress is hurting me.
Your story is only the 2nd story in all my Fanfiction reviews that I can't finish.
It has taken me eight days, and now I'm just disappointed, the was good until it became too much.
You should give more summary warnings, cause this was so hard to read.
Sorry again
Tony Moonstone chapter 56 . 1/10
WHY?
YOU BROUGHT HIM BACK?
I CRIED FOR ORION, THROUGH TEARS AND SHATTERED HEART.
WOW, JUST WOW.
YOU PULLED MY HEARTSTRINGS APART.
HOW IS ORION GOING TO GO ON NOW.
I guess I'll have to wait and see.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well!
Tony Moonstone chapter 48 . 1/9
I so don't want Orion to be at Hogwarts all year.
He's so much better at Durmstrang.
To have to be around light wizards instead of Dark, must be driving him quite mad.
I wonder how long he goes without cursing someone particularly Ron.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well.
Tony Moonstone chapter 29 . 1/6
That was an extremely hard chapter for me to read.
I have no problem reading about torture but when you brought a puppy into it I came 99% stop reading your story, until I had to close my eyes and skip a few paragraphs before I could continue.
Don't do that again.
Onward I read!
Tony Moonstone chapter 28 . 1/6
That was a so intense chapter.
You are the first author to put Neville in the Tournament as well as the first to kill Neville in such a unique way that was totally unexpected.
Loving this story more and more.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well!
Tony Moonstone chapter 21 . 1/5
Now THAT is a cliffhanger!
Neville Longbottom as a Champion?
Never would have thought of that.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well!
Tony Moonstone chapter 17 . 1/4
Wow,
That was an intense chapter to read.
The raw emotion, the pure darkness rolling from Orion.
It sent shivers down my spine.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well!
Tony Moonstone chapter 4 . 1/3
I'm the first reviewer of 2024. Wahoo!
So far the story is quite good, and is rich with a new kind of world to explore with new characters and places.
I'm beginning to like this very different Harry Potter.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well!
Eagle-eyes chapter 67 . 12/29/2023
Love it. Just finished reading and looking forward to the sequel...
Guest chapter 67 . 12/27/2023
good story
Archangel Change24 chapter 1 . 10/23/2023
You know you didn’t have to manufacture a link between the potters and the blacks right? Harry’s grandmother was Druella Potter Nee Black. She married Charlus potter and they had James Charlus Potter.
Guest chapter 56 . 10/7/2023
I'm not crying, you're crying!
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