Reviews for The Black Heir
RodrickBlueLord chapter 2 . 11/25
You know, in my head, being smart/intellectual and admiring Voldemort are almost opposites, kind of dumb actually. This Harry is too impressionable with the snake face that killed his mother, no matter how impersonal it is for him, not to mention Grindelwald, if he expresses this out loud in Durmstrang I'm almost certain he'll run the risk of being beaten

Hating Muggles is understandable if he follows that path, being dark too, but opposing Dumbledore is not synonymous with liking LV, he could very well be a third side that lets the two old weirdos kill each other in Britain

But I haven't read the whole story yet, it might be an unjustified complaint, I hope
Seallyboe chapter 66 . 11/16
Love those kind of thoughts! Cheer Orian I'm with you, M&M have to die they're so frustrating
Eledynor Riddle-Potter chapter 9 . 10/24
Hello dear, I came directly from ao3 and until now I had not had the courage to comment, but now that I comment, dear, please let it be a Harry (Orion) x Tom (Voldemort) pairing. Please And I would also like to know if it is already available or what the sequel to this story would be.
CopperCat4 chapter 38 . 8/28
i keep thinking he should just go to a muggle hospital, disillusioned, and imperio the person closest to giving birth to name their baby Draco Malfoy and once that's done avada the baby and use a few memory charms
Blackman1218 chapter 34 . 7/12
you make dobby sound like a slave from the colonies
InsatiableInsanity chapter 6 . 6/25
So you mention dark wizards can only be with other dark wizards to keep their specific type of magic. However, this doesn’t make sense in Orion’s case. Sirius is dark, yes, but Lily was a muggleborn, which as they explained was even worse than a light wizard/witch in terms of compatibility. Yet somehow Harry is very dark and very powerful. (Not to mention his stay with the Dursley’s which by all accounts should have made his magic even weaker.) This is a pretty glaring contradiction. Still really loving this, but I’d like to see if this is adressed. Guess I’ll keep reading to see!
summer164 chapter 1 . 3/31
Amazing
Archangel Change24 chapter 1 . 3/14
I find the idea of harry and voldemort being together to be kinda disgusting. I mean that is a 67 year old with a 17 year old or a 65 year old pedo with a 15 year old and that is just WRONG on so many levels.
kofirules56 chapter 13 . 2/28
Once again thanks for writing this.

The expression is “bury the hatchet” which is a small axe.
There was another miscue before that but I’ve forgotten the detail.
kofirules56 chapter 12 . 2/28
I’m enjoying this story very much. I read that English is not your first language so please accept my thanks and two small issues, one of which I noticed in an earlier chapter:
The word you mean is PIQUE not “pick” one’s interest. It means to stimulate.

A JIBE is a cutting remark (not a “jib” which is a type of sail)

Please take these small corrections in the kindly spirit they are meant.
HarGrif chapter 10 . 1/13
I do not like Harry being gay! You ought to tell this in your description, it is sad because I like the story so far. too bad your such a candy boy!
Tony Moonstone chapter 58 . 1/10
I'm sorry I can't read your story any longer.
My heart, mind and soul can't stomach it.
Your story was good at the beginning but now it's causing me hurt to witness Orion being a possession and not an equal to Voldemort.
The constant arguing, and the stress is hurting me.
Your story is only the 2nd story in all my Fanfiction reviews that I can't finish.
It has taken me eight days, and now I'm just disappointed, the was good until it became too much.
You should give more summary warnings, cause this was so hard to read.
Sorry again
Tony Moonstone chapter 56 . 1/10
WHY?
YOU BROUGHT HIM BACK?
I CRIED FOR ORION, THROUGH TEARS AND SHATTERED HEART.
WOW, JUST WOW.
YOU PULLED MY HEARTSTRINGS APART.
HOW IS ORION GOING TO GO ON NOW.
I guess I'll have to wait and see.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well!
Tony Moonstone chapter 48 . 1/9
I so don't want Orion to be at Hogwarts all year.
He's so much better at Durmstrang.
To have to be around light wizards instead of Dark, must be driving him quite mad.
I wonder how long he goes without cursing someone particularly Ron.
Onward I read.
Take care and be well.
Tony Moonstone chapter 29 . 1/6
That was an extremely hard chapter for me to read.
I have no problem reading about torture but when you brought a puppy into it I came 99% stop reading your story, until I had to close my eyes and skip a few paragraphs before I could continue.
Don't do that again.
Onward I read!
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