Reviews for The Black Heir
PrimandButtercup chapter 66 . 2/14/2022
I love the details you put into your writing and am ecstatic to continue reading in the sequel!
PrimandButtercup chapter 18 . 2/11/2022
nooooooo siri! but yes, it does make sense for orions character development
Ltbutterfly287 chapter 2 . 1/12/2022
You messed up with grindelwald. That man wasn’t anti muggleborns he was anti muggle. Grindelwald believed that the gift of magic made you equals and superior to muggles. He didn’t see through the eyes of pure bloods he saw magic as something that tied them altogether and that they must stand together and stand above the muggles and i big reason why he felt that wizards need to take the world is because of the death and destruction wrought by WW1 and then he started using items that produce visions of the future and a reoccurring one was the nuclear bomb, seeing the destruction muggles would one day cause he decided they need to rise above them if the world had any chance of surviving.
Ltbutterfly287 chapter 1 . 1/12/2022
I will never understand fanfiction and it’s writers love to take an abused character and take that 5/10 abuse and make it a 9/10. Seriously you people love writing about physically and secaully abused people. Harry’s suffering isn’t even close to what the fandom makes it out to be.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/10/2022
3/10 at most
Guest chapter 15 . 1/6/2022
Fking gay what you mess all the thing you wrote
Mahaley Olson chapter 3 . 12/30/2021
Who’s cutting the onions like geez
Jrocknpoppingirl chapter 33 . 12/22/2021
This part is one of my all-time favorite moments in this fic. The mis-communication? The JUST TALK TO EACH OTHER GDI YOU IDIOTS of the ending? Love it.
Ricee chapter 9 . 12/12/2021
sorry, no. it's just so bad. if you decide to rewrite this without romance then maybe.
Ricee chapter 5 . 12/12/2021
really hope these AN are old and he changed his mind later, really not interested in a slash fic.
Ricee chapter 4 . 12/12/2021
not liking the whole, draco friendship thing
Ricee chapter 1 . 12/12/2021
weird, but not bad. your really shoving the fact that Harry is Orion down our throats tho
tomascatts chapter 40 . 10/23/2021
Except it was YOU he needed to be protected from Dumbledore!
Cassiopaeia chapter 31 . 10/22/2021
I am honestly amazed how you created a story that has the points from the Canon story, such as someone dying in the Triwizard tournament, an addition representative for Hogwarts and, now, the D.A. It may be different from the original but expected. You changed a lot but not at the same time.
Cassiopaeia chapter 1 . 10/13/2021
Cannonically, Harry is really a part black since his grandmother is a Black.
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