Jesus Christ, Idk if I should feel sorry for Orion or not. Like I understand his situation right now but Orion has never truly been loyal with anyone. GEHSHSHSHSHSHS IDK ANYMORE I HATE AND LOVE THIS FIC AT THE SAME TIME

Love it!

Calling this Harry irrational would be an understatement. 10 year olds view on war is different than that of an adult, no matter the books or genius. His upbringing could have warped his mind. Joining someone that murdered your parent just because you agree with him on some things. Voldy is an megalomaniac that will not hesitate to start ww3 is obvious to anyone. He isn't a dark wizard or something. He is a kid who is way over his head. Sirius and Harry should have at least stayed neutral. Gather their own power. Joining either Voldy or dumbles is no one in the right mind would do. It also didn't help that Sirius isn't exactly sane.

omg you have no idea how happy I am that there is a sequel, I thought I had to wait forever to see what happens next(because I downloaded this book a while ago and didn't read it, so I was scared it was abandoned

omg I have one chapter left

I can't believe I'm at chapter 63 already, it's almost the end of the book(them u have to start waiting for you to update) witch in both happy and sad about, happy because my comment can be valid, sad because I'll have to wait (but anyway, hopefully he never gets back together with Lizx #cant remember how to spell his name,the vampire)

I'm at the biggning of chapter 59 , I really hope that harry and laz find get together, I want harry and Voldemort (please let them have a good ending)

Sorry I've been patient, I hate it when harry is with others in harrymort story even then I still read hoping that zraven will be out of the equation but even till half of the story 30-ish chapters he was there and you made me dislike harry in this wavering between two like a cheater he was still his boyfriend, right? he should just break up with zraven I came for harrymort not so harryoc, so what I did is I directly jumped to the ending and there is a sequel for this story... I wanted to spam the author with hate mail, just thinking of the time I spent on reading it... Made me lose interest in reading harrymort now

I'm so messed up rn , It's 4 am and I'm screaming my head off cause I suspected that Lezander was alive and it's true and now I feel like I'm orion and u don't know who I want . I'M SO DAMN CONFUSED.
Anywho this story is amazing and it's one of my fave hp fanfic .you're also a really good writer and I feel you would be able to make a really nice original that could be published cause let's face it there's some awful fanfics out there .
I also like your writing cause you make me feel like I'm orion and I really feel his emotions,I mean I totally just cried it out when the Lezander thing happen and I ship lv/hp and also lz/hp cause they both give orion what he needs.
Is there anyway I could convince you to make this a triad(preety please) cause orion deserves both and it would make a bigger twist !

I found this fanfic interesting, and while I don’t usually like slash fics I thought I’d at least try this one, but in the end it wasn’t the slash elements that put me off, it was the fact that Orion continually shouted, defied, annoyed and antagonised him without much punishment. This annoyed me greatly, along with the fact that you don’t have him hate muggles dispute his history with them and the fact you constantly keep calling him dark when in reality he is at most grey. All in all this fic would have been much better if you didn’t have such an annoying mc.

Orion should have stop speculating things and suspecting Voldemort and should simply ask him before drawing conclusions... this is getting so messy... If Orion suddenly starts trusting Dumbledore I simply feel Orion is becoming too easy to manipulate. He told Tom that he would never trust Dumbledore but wheels are turning rapidly here...hope this dilemma clears soon.

Guess what I'm rereading this

Oh nvm he's twisted af

Damn that hurts the way he go that far for his beloved

This is so sad