wow this is really cool!_

update soon!_

aww too bad harry's not gunna be dark side, well he's dark but its sorta not the same but cool at the same time you get what i mean or is this one of my "talks" that i only understand as my friends tell me

hey i really like this but if u could double space your sentences it would make it alot easier to read thanks

~kinks

Great sart I hope you update soon!

However I think your paragraphs a bit too long It too scrunched up and it's difficult to read, maybe divide them into 2 or more?

Or just shorten it a bit.

An excellent beginning. Great chapter and progress.

This is a really good start. The only thing that really bugged me was how you, most likely by accident, had to chapters on the first page.

i loved the story. it was really good i can't wait for the updates

Nice story. Is this going to be slash?