Reviews for Dancing in the Shadows
Amber-Jade James chapter 18 . 4/7/2008
oh you so need to update soon. can't leave us there!

not at all!

great chapter. Sad chapter


WATCHER in the WOODS chapter 18 . 4/6/2008
That I scorn to change my state with kings...

Pretty good story, though I think Catherine needs to play a strong role in the rescue. I'll be watching to see what happens...
Stevonnie-U chapter 18 . 4/3/2008
WynterSnow chapter 18 . 4/2/2008
As always, the blending of your story with canon remains seamless, combining into a story that is so much better than the original. Catherine’s presence here really brings the story to life, and gives it much more depth than the dark, brooding, and violent episodes of Season Three. I really like Julia, and I like the fact that Catherine is making some friends from Vincent’s world. I guess the question is: will she ever belong 100% to the world below; or to be truly happy, will she always be a woman of both worlds? - Don’t answer that yet, though! I want to see this all playing out as you’ve written it, without knowing any future details.

One thing that struck me while reading this chapter that did not occur to me before, was that it was that Elliot will likely never know that Catherine had survived. In a way, that makes it a tragic love story for him. He was such an interesting character on the show, and I felt that the series basically just threw him away.

You can’t imagine how much I look forward to your weekly updates. It’s almost like waiting each week for an episode of the series to air!
Stevonnie-U chapter 17 . 3/26/2008
Can't anybody write a funny story today! *sob* All the stories I've read made me cry today. *sniff* They were all wonderful but now I'm crying like a pansy! *wah*
WynterSnow chapter 17 . 3/26/2008
It's hard to even find words to adequately describe this chapter. The scenes that actually reflect the series are good, but the scenes you have created between Vincent and Catherine are outstanding. Her description to Vincent of her life in captivity is heartbreaking and touching as she tries to reason with him how much she has at stake in his decision. The way you've blended canon with your own composition is seamless and could not be more flawless.
Comet Moon chapter 17 . 3/26/2008
Good chapter, but I definately do not agree with Vincent on his path

Look forward to more

Ja ne

Amber-Jade James chapter 17 . 3/26/2008
So great to see new chapters from you!

i hope Vincent finds the baby soon this is killing me. probably not the best storie to read while pregnant but what can i say i am hooked

Hope to see more soon


Eviefan chapter 17 . 3/26/2008
I was able to read this over at Cabb just a little bit ago and am happy that you have it posted here so I can review. You know, I always did feel bad for Elliot. He got such a bad deal of things. For once he was not thinking only of himself, protecting Vincent's secret, and all hell broke lose for him. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with him in your story, and how you will go with things, or at the very least get to read what he is thinking. Diana is also someone that I like. I keep saying this but it is true. She's trying to help and she is a key part in getting Vincent to his baby.

Bringing that up ARG on Gabriel. Reading him with that child still gives me the shivers. It also serves to show his motives, about not holding the baby because he wants the child to learn how to comfort himself, and not because he cares for the babies well being either. The way he sees that child is more of a weapon than anyone he loves, though in some sick way he does care for the baby, at least in the show, but it was for his own selfish reasons.

Vincent and Catherine together is wonderful and heart breaking at the same time. That whole scene by the mirror pool where she was telling him about her time in captivity made me want to cry. I kept wanting him to hold her, but I knew why she wouldn't let him. I like that she is able to tell him all this and am sure her words will be with him when he finally does find Gabriel. At the very least I'm glad that she finally let him comfort her and I ams also glad that she is there for him. Now I wonder how the rest will pan out. A week to wait is far to long but I'll be ready for the next update and anxiously so...
chemmom4 chapter 16 . 3/25/2008
Wonderful story. I have always loved Beauty and the Beast and was so sad when it ended. I can't wait to read your next part.

Your characterizations were excellent. Truly very well written.
Vakhdar chapter 16 . 3/22/2008
Very touching! It's great to see them reaching out to each other, and Vincent subduing his fears. And (ahem) about time-LOL! And poor Elliot- trying to recapture integrity, but of course it's the wrong person NOT to trust. Sigh...waiting patiently for more!
JB chapter 16 . 3/21/2008
Holy smokes, Batman! That was the best scene yet!
tammy7874 chapter 16 . 3/21/2008

I've been watching your story unfold here and at Tunnel Tales for quite some time...

I must say something about this chapter.. You have truly truly out done yourself with Vincent and Catherine scene...The scene fit them perfectly all the way...

Reasons being I've seen all the episodes of the show and have got to know the characters quiet well.. I've read every story by authors of their writings of what should have happened and how it should have ended...You have brought the two characters together in a scene just right that would fit them like in the show.. THUMBS UP!

Only one other author I know can do like you did and thats Cathy Moran in her story Spring Roses over at Marina's Beauty and the Beast Site...

I agree with everyone else here I cant wait for the next chapter to unfold..Keep the work up..

Keep up the good work.
Stevonnie-U chapter 16 . 3/19/2008
Oh wow. That's all I can say.
Amber-Jade James chapter 16 . 3/19/2008
wow finally yeah!

awesome chapter for more than that though!

loved the interigation and Elliot in this chapter

hope to see more soon


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