Reviews for Pieces
nessyschu chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
:'( So sad... Those two... 3
Penmaster51 chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
I'm not a huge HP fan but I love the twins and hated Rowling for a bit when I read that Fred died. This is beautiful and I'm glad I found it (though you wrote it a while back ago).
Candyglue chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
Wow, this is just... wow. Amazing.
littlejohnny.lj chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
I love this story.
Evil-Bellatrix23 chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
This was fabulous. You definitely captured Fred and George in this one. Awesome work!
Aurora West chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
Beautiful. You wrote dialogue wonderfully, and the end got me. :)
justastranger chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
That was written in a different angle than most of the other fanfics, but it was more beautiful.
TreeStar chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
nice. i liked how you didn't name deaths or give out more than the absolute minimal ammount of info. and it went beautifully.
SeasonVelvet chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
“George?”

“Don’t.”

“But-“

“Can’t we just laugh about this?”

“I’m trying to.”

“I need you to.”

“...”

“We’re not identical anymore.”

“Don’t say that.”

Harry Potter lacks severity, emotion, depth. But I felt it in Fred and George.
ArcadeFire chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
Wow. In it's simplicity is it's beauty. That's all I have to say.
derf chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
I miss him so much! I mean, you couldn't have written...okay I just checked, in 531 words you have managed to bring me to tears. Well done.

Ohmygod i miss him so much!

This sucks!
gnbrules chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
Great job. You captured their characters perfectly through the story.