|Reviews for Missing Pieces|
| lookingatstars chapter 8 . 6/7/2010
Love this fic, :D charlie lives on in the works of fanfiction.
I especially love how much depth you've added to Charlie what with him trying to protect his brother and little charlie is just so cute :D
| bonboni chapter 7 . 1/10/2008
ooh... who are they arguing about? does charlie and liam have a sister or something? cos i definitely don't recall a girl in their family...
please update soon!
| Frost Hobbit chapter 7 . 1/8/2008
Oh...so sad. Who were the dolls for? I wanna know...
| Frost Hobbit chapter 6 . 1/8/2008
"“What are you feeling right now?” Liam asked, still smiling.
“Bloody pissed off!”
“You should link your revision to emotions. That way you’ll remember!”
“You’re a flaming nutter, that’s what you are.”
“Hey, it’s true!” insisted Liam, “In a few weeks time when you’re taking your exams you’ll be smirking and going ‘Ah yes, I remember that. Liam punched me! Damn him!’”"
BWAHAHA. Hilarious! Loved it.
| Frost Hobbit chapter 5 . 1/8/2008
Ugh, I don't LIKE Liam! (Don't worry, it's not your writing..it's just that I always hated him from his first appearance in The Moth, to his fianl appearance in Greatest Hits.) Another good chapter!
| Frost Hobbit chapter 4 . 1/8/2008
It's very good. Charlie is SO in-character.
| Frost Hobbit chapter 3 . 1/8/2008
It's so sad how Charlie swore he would never do drugs...look where he ended up right before they crashed.
| Frost Hobbit chapter 2 . 1/8/2008
Who was the girl in the picture? ME WANTS TO KNOW. Gah...typical Liam. Telling Charlie he HAS to do something even though he doesn't want to. Poor Charlie.
| Frost Hobbit chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
Ha, finally reading your story. (It's HobbitRockGod from LVI. But I think you knew that.) I liked this chapter. Little Charlie is so cute! Bad, bad Liam. I hate him.
| BananaphoneBob chapter 7 . 1/4/2008
Aww, poor Charlie! His dad is really evil! I wonder who the dolls were for ... I really liked this chapter, it was ... strangely sweet in a way ...
UPDATE REALLY SOON!
| BananaphoneBob chapter 6 . 12/19/2007
WOO! It was updated! Aww, I can just imagine Charlie at 16, HOW CUTE! I really liked that chapter, I thought it was awesome!
| clarett chapter 5 . 10/13/2007
hello! i read your homepage and i'm 14 too, and terribly busy ): and happy birthday :D
ok randomness aside, i love saving charlie pace! i practically cried reading about charlie the end of season three (ok season three is just midway here in my country so i cheated and read sypnosis off the official website :X) and this just completes his life story :D
i love the way how charlie feels so conflicting inside on liam, and it's like this love-hate thing. continue! i want to see how it ends (:
| bonboni chapter 5 . 10/4/2007
yeah, liam deserves that! he's not being a good brother this way and charlie is totally right. i'm sure he'll find a place to stay though. ;)
update soon please!
| BananaphoneBob chapter 5 . 10/4/2007
Congratz on getting an A! I'll happily help burn down your school :P. Angst, yeah, I could imagine them having a lot of angst. Go Charlie! Can't wait to read more!
| PseudonymismyPseudonym chapter 5 . 10/3/2007
cool u hav a twin! ive always wanted 1... i liked this chapter! hopefully there will b a HAPPY CHAPPY next ~~hint hint~~ ~~nudge nudge~~ im lookin forward 2 the next chapter!