|Reviews for Mission: Obliviate|
| fp chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
But this time ALL five pilot have sister or what not in the SAME story.
So I guess it as some originality...
| Acacia Eastbramble chapter 13 . 3/24/2008
| midnightblue123 chapter 13 . 3/20/2008
your end notes are funnier then mine!
little bro: ...aren't you supoose to comment on the actual story?
me: oh, right. It was interesting and funny, speaking of funny why is y-mph
little bro: *covering my mouth* she thinks the story is great and that's all. Can someone get me a bucket of water please?
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/20/2008
cliche, stereotype, or whatever it called.
Baka, justice, the screaming wu same
| Again chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
You most be kidding...
Look it not a flame, but the sister thing his overdone.
almost all the fic with a final oc are sister of the pilot. this plot is done, and frankly I have seen some with a better plot and reason then yours.
Then just looking the girl (who by accident have the same last name as the pilot) I know you just trow them together without trying very hard.
I don't even want to know how you did for the Yuy (condidering that Yuy is not is really name, nether is Barton actually, at least you got Duo right)
then it the name, because obviously Duo and his sister have grown up for a little while before going to the orphanage, but how would you did for Duo name, since he choose it because of Solo (he didn't have any name before then)
Also if you choose to keep the name Duo as his true name (I didn't read to check it) now you will be doing one of my PV
If they are blood related why the hell they have such diferent name. Duo is english( or italian for 2, but let take english), and Satsuki is ... Asian now unless they have duel nationality this is not working!
(same thing for quatre, but for that I don't care. it is difficult to find good arabic name for his 29 sister)
The story is done to death, please let it in his grave!
| Vitanie Tora chapter 13 . 3/19/2008
Nice chapter, but a heads up, I'm going to kidnap Wufei. I'm the only American allowed to drive him crazy. It was a really nice chapter, can't wait to see how things progress in the next chapter, so until later
| steve the snapdragon chapter 12 . 1/7/2008
lead not leaded but that is the only thing that i found with these new chapters. good job. I like your writing style though i think that it could be more... eloquent. well until next time keep typing.
| Acacia Eastbramble chapter 12 . 1/6/2008
Go Quatre! He saved Satsuki! And he's cute! Very, very cute! CUTIE!
Quatre- :blushes: Thank you...
Satta- AW! :hugs him:
Quatre- uh... choking the gundam pilot... :gasps:
Satta- Sry... :lets go: YOU ARE SO CUTE!
Satta- Ah! :kisses him:
Quatre- O.O didn't see that coming...
| Mary chapter 9 . 12/3/2007
Heyo! I just finished reading what you have done on "Mission: Obliviate" and I have to say that it's entertaining. I like the pre-things that you do with the different characters talking about the chapter. They give me giggles. That doesn't sound right... Oh well, I can't wait to read the rest!
Peace out! :D
| Acacia Eastbramble chapter 9 . 12/1/2007
Trowa can be such a kind soul can't he? Btw thanks for reviewing PWB i'll post asap but it'll have to be a short chapter with a teaser at the end... How does that sound?
| Acacia Eastbramble chapter 8 . 11/26/2007
Go you! I love this fanfic! Keep it up! That's an order!
| Acacia Eastbramble chapter 7 . 11/9/2007
Aw... Me likey... UPDATE SOON OR ELSE SATTA WILL DESTROY DEATHSCYTHE AND ALL THE OTHER GUNDAMS! BWA-HAHAHA-BWA-HAHAH- :coughs:
Quatre- you choked on maniacal laughter again didnt you?
Duo- don't worry it happens to me every time...
| Acacia Eastbramble chapter 5 . 10/8/2007
Sweet story, keep it up and i cant imagine what yutaka or trowa's relation look like and as for heero's relation i just imagine him wearing a bow and make up... its minorl distubing... Keep it up!
| steve the snapdragon chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
hm...i'll keep reading. i think it could be good. still have to decide. well until next time keep typing.
| Kana090 chapter 3 . 9/10/2007
Hey, nice chappie. Like the cliffie too, so that means you BETTER UPDATE SOON! Jk, anyway, thanks for updating!
Also, just wanted to say that I'm happy that these 5 aren't all meeting at once. If they did, it'd be. . . I don't know, not right, Unless they ALL got assigned the EXACT same mission, which doesn't seem right. . .