|Reviews for Becoming Night|
| teamjacob2012 chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Why would you make jake the bad guy? Come on awnnn he is wayyyy to nice N hawt to do that. Ugh, i hate Edward
| marsbareater12 chapter 1 . 3/19/2010
I think you should continue it! please!
| TheAngryPrincess13 chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
My fav. vampire is Jasper and my fav. wolf is Jacob tied with Embry.
Poor Bella. :'(
| pencil holder chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
i dont undertstand? was bella raped by jacob while he was bein brainwashed? update :)
| Niki chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
OH MY GOD YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS! Its GREAT! lol
| Angeliss chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
Yay! I find another good fic! When it comes to these kinds of issues, the wellwritten stuff doesn't exist anymore. I am so glad you know how to write a believable one...
| Tomboyangel chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
that was brilliant!
u should have a lot more reviews.
| AKFMC chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
I love the story
Excellent plot line
I hope u continue
and update soon!
Its very well written
and u captured edward perfectly!
| howtheheckdoudeleteuraccount chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
this is SO FREAKING AWESOME!
| YoricksSkull chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
Excellent descriptions! Wonderful writing...great plot! Please pick the story up and continue with it! It's very original! Great job!
| Vamplover chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
| mrs.cullen22 chapter 1 . 10/30/2007
| arria chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
that was very good but very sad
| Daria chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
i thought that was really good and i hope u add on to this chpater.
| Kanamelover chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
wow that was really good.. to bad bella had to get raped...