|Reviews for Longing|
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2016
that was so... sweet!
| RavenxIsxAxBlackxRose chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
this was so visual, and so great. i love the inspiration picture on deviant art, this was truly amazing, keep writing,
| LilMzEmo chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
| Kiminator Mark XII chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
Aw, I loved it! It's short and sweet... perfect_
| Faz Master chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
That was cute, I wish my welcome backs ended like that.
| Pocket Manda chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
Wow, thank you for putting my story on your Favourites List. That's really good. You should continue. It's very detailed and for the first time as I was reading a story, I felt goosebumps form atop my skin. Good job! Keep up the great work.
| Secret Starr chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
Wow that was a Maiko dream! Wonderful work!
| GoldDragonZ chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
short and sweet...very well written, and thanks for reading my story.
| n1t3sama chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
| rutger5000 chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
Very well written. It's so detailed I could easilly picture it in my head. The story itself is too short to be liked or hated. Only poetry can touch someones emotions with only a few hundred words. I would like to read another story, one that is a bit longer. Anyway thanks for taking the effort of postingin it.
p.s. You've added my one-shot on your story alert list. That's pretty much pointless since it's a one-shot and there isn't going to be an extra chapter.
| maikoxshipper chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
| ticket.to.nowhere chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
WOW, stunning detail! I could picture every scene clear in my head! Great story, well done.
| SpiritoftheWhiteRose chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
short but oh so sweet
| Zohh chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
Very nice. I enjoyed reading it!
| blu-flames chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
that was sush a sweet story!...short and to the point.
...so what was teh url for the picture?