Reviews for Don't advance the time
DivineDebris chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
I adore Cedric. This was fantastic!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Thrae Elddim chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
To me at least, your english was perfectly fine! :3 Most people use " for speech instead of ', but after I figured out what was going on there it was good work. :) Happy writing!
ireadfanfic chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
aw, so swet. sequel pleasee
MoonyandProngs chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
That was great! I laughed when the boy caught Cedric and Hermione kissing.
TheShadowDancer chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
the story is awesome even for a first attempt you did amazingly good. And don't worry about your English it's better than mine. (I'm not from England either)
Dazzle Me Again chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
That was great! The last paragraph was kind of depressing, but the whole story was amazing. :) I absolutely loved it.

Have a wonderful day!
I'm home chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
What an awesome story! I loved it!
Cougarfang15 chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
wow. Not only did u do a good job 4 it being your fisrt attempt at HG/CD, but ur english is good to. Bet you just surprised yourself on this story. I luv it. its really good.
wallflower1332 chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
:) like.
fire dragonheart chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Cassie-011 chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
very cute!

and i love that first year! that was brillent!
maishootingstar chapter 1 . 1/7/2008

how nice,

and the first year boy (he was so cute!) picked up a few tips ;)
I'd rather live in books chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
It was good. I liked it very much and you couldn't tell that you aren't from England.
lalababee chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
please please please update!
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