Reviews for Spot
Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
Ok I cry during stories a lot...but never this much...this was like my all time favorite fred/George story on was beautifully written and SO sad
Cara-dactyl chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
This is, and will always be my favorite Fred/George story. It is so sweet, with just a bit of sadness to it. I definitely hope to see more stories like this one again sometime!
Submarine19 chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
*wails, sobs, thrashes around...CRIES MORE* He shouldn't have died. In my head, at least, Fred is still very much ALIVE... I wish you hadn't made it DH compliant. But this story broke my heart (in a good way).. I feel like a bitch for wishing that George joins Fred soon.. because it is so unfair to separate them. It's-just-not-fair! *stamps her foot angrily*

I'll stop my rant now and let you know that I'm in love with your lovely story. It made me cry! I love you for writing this. You are amazing :D :D
smc1214 chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
awww :( That was really sad. It actually made me cry! Very good idea and well written, I liked it :)
Cfings753469 chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
*Sobs into pillow* So. Damn. Beautiful! Amazing piece of writing, awesome in every way, shape and form

I think your reaction to Fred's death was better than mine, I threw the book at a wall and cried for hours
SilverSeas chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
So sad! Oh gosh, I almost cried, but it's so sweet
Terrified of Logic chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
:'( tears rolling... anyway...loved the story...fred :( died :( sad
ronsbabiesmomma chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
one suggestion:

George hummed a response and fell asleep. Fred joined him soon after

It wasn't fair. How could he leave him alone? It just wasn't fair.

this is kind of confusing. maybe you could make a break between the two paragraphs like - or ~~ or something so we know it's supposed to be a different time. you state so later in the paragraph but its still confusing at first for the reader
adavisa chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
I actually cried reading this one. I don't do that often. Great job!
Tinuviel Simbelmyne chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Yeah it is sad indeed, and I imagine it would be the toughest thing ever..

I liked it...

Anomalous Bibliophagus chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
I'm STILL upset JKR killed George.
Flanclanman chapter 1 . 3/14/2008



*breaks down*

You just reminded me that Fred died... ah

*cry cry cry*

JKR is foul and evil for that...

And Snape and Lupin... unnecessary killings...

Lovely story, thank you.


xXRon-luverXx chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
good i liked it... i know i cryed my eyes sout when fred died... lol im hoplessly obbsessed lol good job
Parallelogram chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
Beautifully written - both with the angst and the lemon.

I loved it~.
dreamy delta chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
fabulous...sad...but great
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