Reviews for Love in Affliction
ArtemisCullen2664 chapter 16 . 6/28
I enjoyed reading it very much. hope there might be a squel
Guest chapter 16 . 6/20
Absolutely loved this story.
It is lovely and well thought out.
Thank you for writing it and sharing it with your readers.
Varsini C P chapter 1 . 4/5
Love the plot. Absolutely entranced by the end. Thank you.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/23
ok so I went back to read chapter 1...the countess of Loire is not Bella but someone else. So Edward has been in love 3 times, Elise, countess of Loire, and Bella. That's a lot of falling in love for a 17 year old. Even more so for a 17 year old that said he has never been in love...he even said it to himself...so of course I believed him...it was his pov after all. But now he's a liar? I don't understand that. And if he's only 17 and been in love so many times then that is really contradictive of his I'm a heart breaker, never going to feel anything philosophy.
Guest chapter 14 . 3/23
I thought BELLA was a duchess? Now shes the countess of loire? I'm so confused. Or was he talking about someone else?
Guest chapter 12 . 3/23
Funny how he was in love with Elise because earlier he said that he had never been in love.

So which is it?
Guest chapter 11 . 3/23
Bella has had a life full of...disappointment and betrayal? Oh I can just imagine. It must be SOOOOO hard being a duchess. And we all know that 17 year old problems are the worst kind...LOL What a fucking joke
Guest chapter 5 . 3/23
I really don't understand why Bella has suddenly changed her mind about Edward. Its only chapter 5! And Edward is a worthless piece of shit! Is Bella really in such a hurry to acquire stds and his surely bastard children?
Guest chapter 3 . 3/23
I already disliked Edward but the banter between him and bella in chapter 3 made me HATE him. I can not stand his arrogance, it is VERY unattractive.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/23
why does Edward have to be a whore? hes only 17!
Guest chapter 10 . 12/11/2017
I too am a fan of Pride and Prejudice!
Nataly29 chapter 16 . 10/6/2017
Beautiful story!
Twilightluver chapter 11 . 9/24/2017
Omg! Ur writing is soooo fantastic that i was reading it while pretending to do homework and just realised that this was Earth!
U should be like an author or something!
Bella chapter 6 . 9/24/2017
Good job!
I am SWAN! I am freakin Bella swan!
I am sooooo hiiiigggghhhh
I love j edwwwarddd. Edddwwwarrd
twirob chapter 16 . 8/16/2017
thank you so much for completing and keeping this AMAZING! little story posted on here for us to read ;) i know its been a few years since but i hope you come back to write the lost scenes you mentioned in the a/n at the end here ie maybe their elopement/wedding, the birth and their time abroad ;D
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