Reviews for Love in Affliction
gi-freakazoid chapter 16 . 5/2
There were a few scenes in the story which were similar to Pride and Prejudice, but nevertheless it was an enjoyable read.
jk chapter 14 . 4/19
sooooo let m get this straight. this 17 year old Edward is in love with bella but hes been in love twice before? god this story is a fucking joke that man child has no idea what love is...god fuck yourself lord edward
jk chapter 13 . 4/19
haha its what bella gets for chasing a whore
jk chapter 5 . 4/19
why is bella even thinking about "choosing" Edward he'll just take her virginity and then move on to the next whore. knowing hes a total skank why is she even entertaining the iea? so chapter five review up to this point

Edward is
arrogant,childish,a snob,and a whore

bella is
naïve and stupid
jk chapter 2 . 4/19
hoe many woman has he been with? and how many batards does he have?
jk chapter 1 . 4/19
Edwards ALWAYS been a ladies man? hes just a fucking kid! and hes already a huge arrogant ass. why in the fuck would anyone want him with bella? I say let the duchiess of whatever have hi skanky ass. if hes been fucking every girl he sees hes got stds and kids already since there were no condoms back that really what you want for bella? just a nasty used up cock with a huge ego...I hope his cock is tiny
PAT2024 chapter 16 . 2/14
Nice story. I like everything with an historic background.
I would have loved sometimes more details and more in depth point of views: eg. Bella's reaction when she first meets Ed is not realistic, he does nothing to really provoke such an angry response, on the other side I particularly loved Edward's letter.
Thanks for sharing anyway
janiqs chapter 16 . 2/8
Lovely tale, well told. Thank you!
Am Team Wolf chapter 16 . 1/18
I love your story! I love the plot too, even if it is incredibly sad in parts and made me shed some tears!
Somebodyrandom chapter 16 . 1/17
I loved it so much, thank you 3
Twilightlover281 chapter 16 . 11/27/2014
Loved it so much! Well written and just my type of story!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
I don't know if you're still doing any editing on this story, but in this first chapter, you mentioned Alice reaching for a "tissue" instead of using a handkerchief (paper tissues weren't used/invented yet) and Bella dropping her brush noiselessly on the "carpet" instead of it clattering noisily onto the wooden floor (carpet wasn't popular until early the next century, but rugs were in use). Just something to consider if you care to keep your story authentic. Liking it so far!
lilia.khan.52 chapter 16 . 6/21/2014
well, it was wonderful and amazing and i don't have words for it's beauty
Guest chapter 16 . 5/28/2014
Love this story but the end is ruining my relaxation ship with your main characters. I don't like how they treated their friends and family. I wouldn't welcome them back with open arms.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/28/2014
Someone should tell Bella.
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