Reviews for Love in Affliction
purple wolves chapter 3 . 9/6/2007
i ABSOLUTELY LOVE your story! it has one of the best plots i have seen so far! i LOVE the fact that it takes place in the 18th century! keep up the GREAT work and update soon!
twilightprincess2010 chapter 3 . 9/6/2007
i like this story alot! the sarcasm and flirting is all so real life lol i think thats the right way to put it but plz update soon! and i think u should make edward alittle jelous of bella and someone just a suggestion
shattered-picture-frame chapter 3 . 9/6/2007
this is a really intriguing story. i love the vocabulary and discriptiveness you put forward.

i'm just wondering, what did edward mean when he said “I could easily get what I want and you would have no choice"

just wondering.

please update soon!

Horrible.Souls chapter 3 . 9/6/2007

funny lingo

"I beseech u..."


Kasai13 chapter 3 . 9/6/2007
I really enjoy this story, I think its because it kind of has a Jane Austin lang effect in it. I hope you cont with it.
lizlizlizliz chapter 3 . 9/6/2007
OMG!one of the best stories ever!
katygirl chapter 3 . 9/6/2007
Well, I must say, this story is the !BEST! I have read so far. Please continue writing, I really love how this story is turning out.
carrie chapter 3 . 9/6/2007
OMG!I todally J'adore it! keep on writting! AND FAST!
lizbre chapter 3 . 9/6/2007
Hi I love your story and if you still need a beta email me at I am usually pretty quick and I only beta for one other rignt now so I am not overwelmed. I would be glad to help.
MartaSwan chapter 3 . 9/6/2007
omg that story is so reminds me slightly of pride and prejudice...i love this story!

i'll add to my favs


Kalien chapter 3 . 9/6/2007
hey :) I just loved the dialogues! looking forward to the next chapters...
Aleakim chapter 3 . 9/6/2007
I love it! Their interactions are hilarious! I don't think he's going to win, at least not the way he thinks.

I bet on Bella. She has Alice and that's the nearest.*roll*

Well, the same as always. Keep it coming!
leiahlaloa chapter 3 . 9/6/2007
*smirks* I continue to enjoy this revamping (excuse the pun) of our dear Edward and Bella.

I find it fascinating to watch (err.. read) Bella so blatantly refusing Edward-when in the actual series she was under a spell from the moment she laid eyes on him.

I rather enjoy it actually.
Big Boots To Fill chapter 3 . 9/6/2007
that tale was splendid i say, splendid! well done my dear! it is not so often that one as talented as you comes along. please carry on writing soon!

[p.s. this stry is so god. heheh lol; fancy sayings are so cool.]
abigail ann chapter 3 . 9/6/2007
KEEP GOING! i love it
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