Reviews for Love in Affliction
endlessshimmy chapter 2 . 9/4/2007
very good so far.

keep going.
Emy chapter 2 . 9/4/2007
Great story so far update soon
Azareth Sakura chapter 2 . 9/4/2007
this gets better and better (:

if you need a beta, i've got a pretty decent grasp on english grammar...
always watching chapter 2 . 9/4/2007
more more more!

or ill kill you

from always watching

HEY YOU with the glasses chapter 2 . 9/4/2007
EEK! This story is WONDERFUL, obviously. Just like your other ones. UPDATE!
Kuon chapter 2 . 9/4/2007
*swoons and super glomps Saiyachick* Fabulous! ~ There weren't that many spelling errors so no biggie there lol
Kuon chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
Oh *amazed* Awesome chapter you got me hooked *displays fishing hook* lol XD
Aleakim chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
I love the story, though Edward is a little OOC. It's funny how when he's human, he isn't that faithful himself anymore(until he knows Bella, of course). And Bella squaling at the thought of marriage made my day. I guess it's more than fine if she wasn't raised to shudder with that.

I like the story, even if I would like to slap Edward in this first chapter. I enjoy your one-shots, so I'll go on reading(If you continue wrting, of course) and I'll try to review every chapter. Now, I'll read and review chapter 2.
Enigma1918 chapter 2 . 9/4/2007
I love it! And don't worry about grammar errors, I hardly noticed them! Update soon please.
Goose17 chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
please update. it looks like such a good story!
straywords chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Oh, I love it! I see you're channeling Austen plot-wise ! Can't wait to see more.
ilo6409 chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
wow! great first chapter it sounds really promising! can't wait to read what comes next XD
DMLefty chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Lovely, as always.

Absinthe chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Enigma1918 chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
This is soo Good! You are awesome!
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