|Reviews for Love in Affliction|
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/9/2013
LEMON PLEASE xx
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/9/2013
That was an epic chapter once again thankyou for sharing your marvellous talent ma'lady *courtses*
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Oops sorry I meant 15 not 25 xx
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
That was epic can't wait to read the next 25 chapters xx
| Liv-Love-Work-Play-READ chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
Sounds a great story story so far I can't wait to read the rest xx
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/25/2013
Martin ushered into the room once more only to have Jasper and Edward Cullen follow him. "Mr. Jasper Cullen and Mr. Edward Cullen."
[I would think Edward would be announced first, since he has the grander title.]
Jasper and Edward bowed and greeted the Brandon's. "How fairs your day?"
[Should be FARES.]
"Alls fair in love and war."
[All's or All is fair...]
| miranda04 chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
I like this so far. The writing is done nicely and I can picture the scene in my mind and "hear" the way they speak.
My main bone to pick is Edward's age. Women (girls) did tend to marry young, but men of means finished their education, etc. Men were not expected to marry by the time they turned 18. Though I can imagine Edward messing around with females, I wouldn't consider him a "ladies' MAN" before he even turned 18!
I wish he was older, but I can suspend my disbelief.
| dbpbatm chapter 16 . 9/22/2013
This was a fun read!
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/17/2013
Lady Rosalie Daphne Hale Cullen Lord Emmett McCarthy Cullen Amelia Esmeralda Cullen, Tristan Jasper Cullen, Travis Emmett Cullen, Trevor Edward Cullen, and Audrey Isabella Cullen
(Amelia, Tristan, Travis, Trevor, Audrey)
Viscount Edward Carlisle Cullen Viscountess Isabella Marie Swan Lucille Elizabeth Cullen, Olivia Alice Cullen, Daniel Anthony Cullen, Melanie Renee Cullen, Joshua Thomas Cullen, Connor Masen Cullen
(Lucy, Olivia, Danny, Melanie, Josh, and Connor)
Lady Alice Delaney Brandon Cullen Lord Jasper Samuel Cullen Stephen Joseph Cullen, Eleanor Jane Cullen, Simon Cornelius Cullen, Estelle Louisa Cullen, Noah James Cullen, Sienna Jillian Cullen, Holly June Cullen, Julius Zachariah Cullen
(Stephen, Nora, Simon, Stella, Noah, Sienna, Holly, and Julius)
Dutchess Elise Random strangers Phillip George Matthias (Poisoned stable boy's son- what he would've been named if he had lived), Giles Charles Dublin and David Nicholas Dublin (her sister "adopted" her male misfires), Mavis Addison Perk (Adopted by neighbor whose doorstep she was found on) and Madeline Angela Cheney ( Adopted by couple bribed to keep Elise's secret)
| H chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
| tinksauble chapter 16 . 9/12/2013
I absolutely loved this fic! Thanks for the great read!
| pauleen chapter 16 . 9/3/2013
I absolutely Loved ot. Every single chapter. I love tjat Bella and Edward didnt indulge in all of the norm of their time. He called her what he felt. She never carw or give two hoots what others thought of her. Which Edward felt too. Two halves of one heart. Well done.
| pauleen chapter 7 . 9/3/2013
WwwwHAT!? Did he just ask Jasper why people pass judgement against him? Tisk Tisk Edward.
| pauleen chapter 6 . 9/3/2013
Very intriguing. I wonder what Secrets Edward has?
| pauleen chapter 3 . 9/3/2013
I am loving this story. There is something so innocent and romantic about stories from te 1800's and even earlier.