Reviews for Gone with the Sin
pastelstripes chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
I can't belive I'm the first reviewer for this... This is awesome- you portrayed the inner monolouges(sp?) of the characters well. I don't see any mistakes at all- I'm not really looking, but from what I see, this is awesome and almost perfect. Nicely done. I'm honored to be the first reviewer of a fic like this.