|Reviews for Folie à Deux|
| ProperT chapter 19 . 3/12/2008
What is Pomona doing? This can't be good... not good at all. Hpw can you say how much alike they are but still think they're not made for each other? Gods I hate contradictions... sometimes, lol. Great Update. Yeah for Dumbles being back too.
| theburninator chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
so happy that this is the sequel! well on to read more : )
| Kiss-This2010 chapter 19 . 3/7/2008
sorry it took so long for me to review...i havent had a lot of time on my hands!
I really liked the conversation w/ sev and pomona...it was really sweet!
Can't wait for more!
| Cymrugal chapter 19 . 3/6/2008
Poor Minerva! Good on Severus for slapping (gently) some sense into her! And Pomona's a hoot. Great chapter (except for poor Ginny-good thing we know how that part turns out!). Now I'm even more curious to see what happens w/ Severus and Minerva. Surely she'll need some comforting or something.
| ToManyLetters chapter 19 . 3/6/2008
I was wondering when I'd be seeing an update for Folie à Deux. Very glad to see one.
Mm, Merlin, the time has come when all the chaos involving poor Ginny's 'abduction' comes to pass. I really do feel sorry for her - I try my hardest to defend her character against those that would claim her a Sue.
I love Pomona's strong desire to fire a sling of foul language in Lockhart's direction. She's not alone, of course, so many of us share her sympathies.
With the Severus and Minerva pairing, the whole "Weren't you saying..." and "Your moment has come at last..." lines fit so much better. The way the two feed off of one another appears nearly poetic with the relationship as a background.
Severus slapping Minerva seems a little uncalled for, I think. I see him more as manipulating his words to get to her on a more emotional level that with a physical level. It would have worked better with a different character or characterisation, I think.
Yay! Dumbledore is back.. now.. for the next chapter...
This story seems like it's approaching an end - what are your plans for it, lengthwise?
Good chapter, keep up the good work.
| loser by choice chapter 19 . 3/6/2008
Revalations between Sev and Pommy? Poor dear isn't making him feel better talking that way. But Dumbledore's back! Whoo!
| hmm chapter 19 . 3/6/2008
well id call this chapter just filler basically, i mean it was needed but at the same time we don't know whats up with the relationship, although i did like that little side conversation at the end. anyway it seems pretty weird because this story has turned pretty serious but i think thats just because the part of the story its taking place in so. omg it took forever for that update please update sooner this time! please!
| LisaT chapter 19 . 3/6/2008
Oh, 'nother lovely chapter. I like the way this switches from humour to drama. BTW, I'm not sure it's necessary to explicitly state the POV at the top - the narrative should make that immediately obvious, especially since you're not using the first person. Lovely seeing a Pomona pov, though.
| Bergerac chapter 19 . 3/6/2008
yay an update! i loved when severus slapped minerva, soo funny. and the conversation between pomona and snape. pretty much the entire chapter but thought i would tell you my favorite parts :) can't wait for the next update- seriously, i can't wait for the next update so please make it very soon :)
| Princess Gillybean chapter 19 . 3/6/2008
ooh, nice chapter. I can't wait for the next one!
| smileymrd chapter 19 . 3/6/2008
Although, I hope they get together! You've given me the impression that last night was just a fling!
I would love them to get together, after all they've been through aswell!
Brilliant chapter and so near the end of the 2nd book!
Please update soon!
| trulyamused chapter 19 . 3/6/2008
Nice follow up to the last chapter. Somehow, I doubt they'll be able to keep their agreement though.
Thanks for the update.
| Ladybug21 chapter 19 . 3/6/2008
Nice chapter! A lot of direct HP quotes and such, but so much fun to see it all from Pomona's point of view! I have to say, I was cracking up when I read, "(Well, Albus maybe. Severus and Filius, on a good day. The centaurs, if…)" LOL! :)
And I loved loved LOVED the scene where Severus slapped Minerva. It was just so... human of him, for lack of a better description. It totally worked.
I also liked Severus and Pomona's awkward little conversation down in the dungeons. Very well done.
| Kurissyma san Tybalt chapter 19 . 3/6/2008
No! Meanie Pomona! MINNIE AND SEVVY ARE MADE FOR EACH OTHER! *pokes out tongue*
| Chemistress chapter 19 . 3/5/2008
So much that happens on that morning after - if it were not so dramatic that would be just what one wishes for in order to be distracted from ones confused feelings ... Well at least Severus is now confident enough to slap her cheek to help her get her strengh back, not sure he would have done that a few days ago?
Pomona is just wonderful - ever so innocently telling him just what a stupid promise he has made early in the morning ...