|Reviews for Waiting for Dawn|
| RomansGirl chapter 6 . 9/21/2007
I think you handled the meeting very well. It's hard for me to write things like that. I do better when I can stay with one character for awhile, but when I have to write about others I don't know as well, I cringe.
I rounded on Sam. “You of all people should hold your blame!”
Way to go Bella!
| RomansGirl chapter 4 . 9/21/2007
O, good chapter! I like the banter between Bella and Alice. And for some reason, Edward recapping the wedding arrangements for Bella at the end and saying it would be held at twilight gave me goose bumps!
| RomansGirl chapter 3 . 9/21/2007
I was told by Stupid Shiny Volvo Driver that I MUST check out your story.
I like it so far. I'm curious as to what is going to happen. I'm only on Chp 3, so no clues for me yet.
I like this line:
“Tomorrow... Tomorrow, Alice attacks.”
| pinkie07 chapter 12 . 9/21/2007
Great job! I loved how she awoke in his arms, in their room, & the sensations, & her eyesight (wish I had that vision again!). Nice details...the feeling on her skin,the air, Edward's scent so strong (wouldn't some Twilight cologne be hot seller for Christmas! need a big bottle named EDWARD!) But seriously...
Liked the hunting-glad Bella didn't start small w/bunnies, she tackled animals her own size. And running too-good job w/that.
You do have more, don't you?
| masochistic lion lover chapter 12 . 9/20/2007
ep! omg this is soo good. i am so excited that you updated! nice job! update soon!
| cHi-1000-SpRiNgS chapter 12 . 9/20/2007
aw! yayy for edward and bella, no more restrainant - great chapter! can't wait to see what'll hapen next! update son!
| Aulat chapter 12 . 9/20/2007
lovely chapter update when you can.
| lizhasredhair chapter 12 . 9/20/2007
aw i loved the last part, update soon!
| TheresNothingInside chapter 12 . 9/20/2007
ah... you update soon
| SpySyd chapter 12 . 9/20/2007
This is probably the best fic I've ever read about E/B. Honestly, you're doing a wonderful job. The transformation was so well written! Such a great way to use the "weirdness" of Bella's brain.
| koerle chapter 12 . 9/20/2007
You really do the charcters justice with your interpretation! Lover the way the story is evolving!
| Sh.C chapter 12 . 9/19/2007
Oh. My. Gosh. That was so incredible! It was so true to the books. I love how you accepted the true nature of the characters and used that to motivate your story. Job VERY well done. I know that at this point the story probably ends (or lets us create our own ending in our imaginations) but if you have more to share, PLEASE DO!
| Jexena chapter 12 . 9/19/2007
That was completely amazing!
| TheresNothingInside chapter 7 . 9/19/2007
ok good story i'll finsih reading it tomrrow but its 1 in the moring and my neck hurts,luv the story _
| GlodenTwilight chapter 12 . 9/19/2007
i loved this chapter it was great. the detail was wicked good i cant wait to see what else you have in store. cant wait for the next update