|Reviews for Waiting for Dawn|
| AmazinglyEnough123 chapter 6 . 9/8/2007
thats such a good story i love it!
| MistressCashew chapter 6 . 9/8/2007
I love it! Everyone's in character, and it's just...wow!
| stupid shiny volvo driver chapter 6 . 9/8/2007
This is wonderful! I especially love the entire conversation between Bella and Renee in chapter two. It is exactly how I would want Renee to react. You have done so well keeping everyone right in character, I'm not kidding...it's scary. Don't worry if you feel it's coming too quickly...sometimes the words write themselves. Just wait until the day comes when you seem to fight for every word or rewrite the same chapter 4 times because it's just not perfect. Remember...you can always go back and make additions or corrections any time. Right now though, every chapter you have posted stands very well.
Stupid Shiny Volvo Driver
| marakparker chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
Wow, this was really very good! Ill be back! I think that Charlie went a little OOC when they told him, but all the other characters were realistic. I'd also like to see more of Edward's actual character- he doesn't have much depth in the story at the moment- but I'm sure you'll develop that as the story goes along. This is really very good...
| PatricksJessica chapter 6 . 9/7/2007
Great chapter. Looks like things will turn out okay for Bella and Edward. Unless of course Jacob comes back with a different plan.
| hkcjphillips chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
This is awesome! PLEASE keep writing!
| writergirl6 chapter 6 . 9/7/2007
yay this is so good, LOVE IT!
| soraloveskairi159 chapter 6 . 9/7/2007
| PatricksJessica chapter 5 . 9/6/2007
Great chapter. It would be great to see the treaty resolved to allow Edward to change Bella without reason to worry about the treaty. You are doing a great job! Keep them coming!
| karensmith chapter 5 . 9/6/2007
I really like the story, the speeches in chapter one were so sweet.
| vjd chapter 5 . 9/6/2007
I'm really enjoying your story so far. My only advice is try not to rush into anything. That is the biggest mistake I see with stories on here. Part of the enjoyment of a story is the suspence as you wait for the big events to happen. It makes them all so much better!
| lita moon chapter 5 . 9/6/2007
UPDATE i love this story if you dont update ill combust plz update soon!
| soraloveskairi159 chapter 5 . 9/6/2007
omgomgOMG!1 great story!
| alex9621 chapter 5 . 9/6/2007
wow i love this story! keep it up!
| lizhasredhair chapter 5 . 9/6/2007
I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY
almost like the real thing, really.