Reviews for Cinnamon Lips
RoxanneTheGreat chapter 3 . 11/14/2012
Lol When Roxas's mom thought Axel was a girl I laughed so hard I fell off my bed...that hurt, but anyway nice work! Can't wait until Axel warts a dress! XD
Sleepless Disaster chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Funny and cute! I love it! I love the way you write, it just pulls the reader in :)
doomungus chapter 3 . 5/12/2010
lol
Suna Kokaru chapter 3 . 3/13/2010
ahaha i love this story, omg i laughed so hard at the last line, which means your going to have to wear a dress. lol i love your writing style and the ideas, their unique hilarious and fun in every chapter, keep writing
Pinuiini chapter 3 . 12/17/2009
... poor Axel.
ishipthat chapter 3 . 10/26/2009
Oh my gosh! I friken love it!

Axel in a dress ! omg

Would love to read more

xoxoxoxox

TheMAJORfangirl
cloudstrachey chapter 3 . 8/29/2009
Hahaha this story is hilarious. I couldn't believe it when Roxas' mom thought Axel was a girl. Hysterical! Please update; I want Axel over for dinner...
CorderoyPants chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
This is awesome. [:

I would love to see the rest of this story.. And Axel in a dress.

In advice, I would suggest a nice emerald green slip.. Or maybe purple. xD

Haha, I can't wait for the next chapter.
toastyoats chapter 3 . 6/30/2009
both hilarious and intriguing, i'm hooked, lined, and sunk.

if you will. :)

looking forward to the next update!
AnimeGirl375 chapter 3 . 6/17/2009
omg i just LOVED THIS! i luv the axel/roxas pairing and this made me luv it even more, with the sexy!axel and the cute!roxas and his obsession with cinnamon hearts! and axel in a dress...that's gold, baby, gold.
Revolution Remix IX chapter 3 . 4/22/2009
...ROTFL! Axel in a dress! XDD! Can't stop laughing!

...5 Minutes later...

XD! Okay. *wipes eyes* I'm done. Yes! Hot steamy kissy face action! But blast! It's cut short by Roxy's revealation! And Roxy's mom: HILARIOUS! I wish my mom was like that. Just to see my mom go "OHMAHGAWD!MYCHILDISGAY!" would be funny as hell. :D Come out with more soon please!

:D Remix
Revolution Remix IX chapter 2 . 4/22/2009
ROTFL! If my mother caught me making out with another girl...she'd walk right pass us. But I'd still say "Fuck!" because she'd give me a lecture on public behavior and stuff like that. Hahaha, I almost fell laughing at the last line!
Revolution Remix IX chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
I just want you to know, you've got me hooked to this song! I love how Roxas was in pure drunk spicy candy bliss with Axel's kiss. XD And Xemnas being all paranoid, makes me gigglesnort.
Sunset Love chapter 3 . 4/20/2009
i just found out this was updated! i was mega excited! xD

I. started. CRACKING UP when Roxy's mom thought Axel was a girl. I couldn't stop giggling... until they started making out. /

roxy! why'd you stop his sex drive?

and axel. in a dress. Oh. My. God. I can't wait! :D

UPDATES! :D
RecklessxDreamer chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
Wow, this is highly amusing.

I can't believe Roxas' mom! I started cracking up so at her part.

Lovely job!
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