Bastante buena obra (actualmente en libro 3) la obra fue por un buen rumbo mostrando cosas interesantes sobre el mundo y su funcionamiento sin llegar a sentirse pesado ni molesto.

i take it after that this story has been abandonedit's a pity, i extremely enjoyed itive ended up bookmarking at the last chapter of book 5 in the hopes that there is an eventual continuation.

Instead of all the exciting plans I wish you had just completed this absolutely brilliant, gem of a story...:(

no offense but why does voldemort want to make harry his prince? tom seems 100x better a choice.

harry telling hermione about the parsel thing feels so out of place that i am 99% confident to say its cause his ability is about to go public and the author doesnt want harry and hermione at odds for not telling her
after all shes so special etc. (eyeroll)
god-author interveened and made harry ooc just to make stuff he wants happen
(if im wrong then apologies but at least it seems like this rn)

after all this time beeing treated like shit by griffindors why doesnt harry regret not having chosen slytherin?

"ive missplaced myself again"...xD

idk the story is okay but the way 11 year olds get portraied is so... gross
NO ELEVEN YEAR OLD IS A BOMBSHELL WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?
11 year olds can be adorably pretty and cute
similarly gourgous is something that starts around 17 as a bare minimum
idk i supose ill just ad in my head canon that hogwarts starts late and they are all already 16

didnt you say something like this in an earlier chapter "the eating time shortend and the play time became longer- harry went to play quiditch with the others"?
this impls harrys first time with a broom was offscren, overall the story is starting to grow on me tho

again: harry acusing snape or suggesting it is so weeird. HE IS ELEVEN? HELLO? those arent the thoughts of an 11 year old

wtf why is harry anti voldemort? so far his knowledge is that mugleborn parents are complete idiots and that voldemord saves them.
the torturing was bad sure but harry has been anti voldemord since before

im a little put off by all the oversexualizing the 11 year olds. like... fred and gorge thinking about getting boys away from their (currently 10 year old) sister?
or harry noticing how pretty other girls are? people calling him a player?
girls in og series became interesting around book 4 and even then it was just minor crushes and very timid exploration.
this stuff belnogs at a point in the story where they are 16 and its weeirding me out
i get that as the author you have to have a sort of plan but to the reader they are 11 year olds and reading on how you are thinking of who is going to be matched to whom is just idk extremly uncomftable

this is so weeird. the german is just like i would say it (albeeit wrong gramer- not that i give a shit about that)
but the translation is so... meager. this is the first time i feel like german might actualy not be a trash language. maby we have the best language for insulting people or something lmao

im always super anoyed when people take movie hermione instead of book hermione

but the minus points u colected for that get made up for your funny ELF tests which would just fit perfectly into the story

to be fair: if she went over board on a big boat then the parents were genuinly unfit to have a child in their care