Reviews for Hero's Return
SorceressEternityIII chapter 15 . 6/28
Aww, no more story! I was hoping for more.
SorceressEternityIII chapter 12 . 6/28
Pink haired howler monkey lmao! Favorite line in this chapter! The reactions from everyone was hilarious, easily my fave chapter so far!
Guest chapter 15 . 12/9/2015
Marching death to all things yaio
emmawalters090 chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
i cant wait to see the rest of story
MasterYaoiCollector chapter 15 . 11/11/2012
hmm how about naruXino? or naruXtemari? just giving a sugestion XD and i hope you can add more to this soon would love to know what happens next in the chapters to come

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ChronoMitsurugi chapter 12 . 7/20/2012
Not a fan of KakashixShizune or IrukaxAnko so I have been skipping anything even remotely related to that.

Also skipped the whole Hyuuga scene to avoid any NarutoxHinata.

From what i read inbetween all the jumping around, i have to say pretty good fic so far.
Annalise93 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
love this :D
ooblah chapter 11 . 12/10/2011
LEARN YOUR GRAMMAR hashin...? hetake...? ren? rly... nice spellin.. so what are u in preschool?
sarim chapter 15 . 8/21/2011
then make sasuke a girl and narusasu!
happycheese chapter 15 . 8/19/2011
I really think you should continue this be it a sequel i don't mind and also i like naruxhina plus you've already kinda hinted at it can't wait for the sequel/ next chapter :P
vd.alfredo chapter 15 . 1/22/2011
awesome story

hope u continue soon again!
heather XD chapter 15 . 1/16/2011
NARUHINA! holy shit I luved this! I spent 4hrs reading everything glad I did ! It was so worth it especially at 2am :p
Biennia Baron chapter 15 . 12/12/2010
Does there have to be a pairing?
Vangran chapter 15 . 11/26/2010
Naruhina all the way. And a sequel would be cool if it worked.
Mister Whitey chapter 15 . 10/22/2010
Hey, keep writing this. Keep it NaruHina, make it small harem, throw in tenten. Great Minato Speech. Get Minato laid, he can have kurenai, the can mourn together.

Just keep writing it.
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