|Reviews for Bittersweet|
| bookenworum chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
well, If it makes you happy, then I'll certainly drop a review!
I liked the effect they have on each other!
and I couldn't happen but notice that you had a few typos:
Straight - strait
Completely - compleatly
Different – differant
Drag and jerk around - Grag and jerk him around...
Exhausted – exausted
Stretched – streached
Recheck – recheak
do you have spelling check? it can help lots :)
mine is removed -.-, but when I had it, it was useful.
and i'm sure that they were accidental, I juts felt the need to point them out!
I hope you don't mind that I still review somehing that was written a year ago...
| lady timari chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
hey that was a great story but can you continue to wright more i loved this story so-far so please write more :) ;) :D ily pleaseemaile me go on my profile and get my e-mail write me
| Xpectashauns chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
| Barranca chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
The last sentence was wow. I guess Light really does not know what he will do until he arrives there.
| Rainbowness chapter 1 . 10/30/2007
I REALLY liked it hun it was beautiful and very sweet. The only complaint I really have is your spelling, ack I'm sorry to say this but I found a lot of errors. Check your spelling. But the story was really great and I encourage you to continue.
| Bloom Flower chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Brilliant! PLEASE CONTINUE!
| Nokturnal Augury chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
Tho thweet. Yet not. Bittersweet was just the right title, whether it's often used or not :)
| Gingerbread Owl chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
| Bukotsu-Tawainai chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
Good job! D
I like it :3 Write more.
| Dante's Muse chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
Awe KawaII! so cyute. I would love to see this taken further!
| Reijou chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
That was a wonderful read :D Nice job (thumbs up)
| Fifty-I chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
oww come on you should continue it, this fic has tons of potential. It was so cute i love it! I notice a few tipping errors but nothing important.
Please give us a sequel... or a whole fanfic you decide X)
| Rose-Dragonfire chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
| whitelilly chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
u should add more. Its really sweet and cute!
| Stringlish chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Yeah I noticed that about the fic titles too. hahah love how quickly L let go of the fact he was nearly killed, just long enough to kiss light... I go for the option of abandoning the death note lol. L's too cute of an option to pass up. Don't be stupid Raito!