|Reviews for Five Times Kon Almost Told Tim He Loved Him|
| xXxUberUkeChanxXX chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
okay...ummm wut the wat? i don't get it like at all umm can u help and tell me wut this is about. I thot this was supposed to b about superboy and robin yaoi or sumthin but i guess i was wrong!
| Washington-Jones chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Awww ! I love !
| Vaoni chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
I wish there was more of this! I really enjoyed it! Please write more
| Billie the fourth sage chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
That last bit could have very well made me cry D:
Very sweet and sad, I think you did really well emoting it.
| Darcie Blain chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
Aha!I knew Conner had feelings for Robin!Good nner, just go out and tell Tim you love him already!
| Litt chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
I adore this because it shows so many sides of each boy and expresses something they can't or won't. Together they are adorable. I've read so much of them together and apart that I'm fairly sure the fandom Tim and Kon are the ones in the comics, so you see I get fairly disappointed when they don't just tackle each other. One of the things I've noticed are the facts that the boys are boys: they are awkward, they are hormonal, they are trying to find things out without actually having to ask or say them; another is that they know too much of this and not enough of everything else.
Watching them struggle with simple things has always been the one thing that kept their humanity comforting. With love, I guess they're both so comfortable with each other it just seems natural they'd gravitate. Here are very realistic scenes where it could range from casual to extreme bouts of confessions and they're in character. You did an excellent job at manipulating them to your theme and keeping me guessing and wincing.
!) Trust. Stuck in their old ways. It's very cute and painful at the same time. It's so comfortable I feel the tension in the air-this happens all the time in the real world and I can empathize on both counts, but more so with Kon because I'm anxious now too. How you introduce their mutual trust in the first half is great; Kon's little slip up is very natural; his regret, very palpable.
) Eep! I'm...this is beautiful in a dark, frantic light that I kind of want but don't have because I'm not risking anything, ever. I want that, even the denial. ANyway, "already recognizes the moment passing" sums it up as if this has happened before. The last line is so dark, and I keep thinking Luthor or Peter Pan.
#) _ I wonder.
$)Oh, the irony. YJ, why'd you go? The good ole' days, huh? That's so -I keep running out of words-cute. He had a crush back then too? When we're young and infatuated, not to mention in close quarters, it's natural to follow our object's movements. Kon has a lot to look forward to. I like how Bart is a little distraction to them both, something to relate to and shield from. He keeps referring to the future. It's...sad.
%)"because Conner doesn't love her." That's fantastic! I wrote about these two in a fic of mine ("Where You Go") and the tension was there, and used a hint of jealousy and a dash of childish logic. I see that here, tension and, again, franticness here, and the way you get in his head almost makes his logic seem strained.
"And it's probably for the best." Aw, man. I'm gonna cry. You know what else? The boob line and the train of though that follows was great.
Again with the irony.
You're great, keep it up!