|Reviews for Heledirn, Nadirio Ernil o Eryn Lasgalen!|
| Destined Darkness chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
haha lol, i think the certain friend would already be dead, if it was me lol
| Irritable Insanity chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
Yeah, that would be embarrasing. Getting hauled into court is bad enough, but if you're a member of a gov't and get pulled in, urrgh. And for killing birds? Ha! Good stuff
| ArodieltheElfofRohan chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
*laughs* Can't wait for the sequel, Cal! ;)
| lindahoyland chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
This was most enjoyable.I look forward to the sequel and finding out what happens next and why Legolas is killing such beautiful birds.
| Midnight Promise chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
Oh, poor, poor Legolas! *continues laughing*
Awesome humor, I am starting to feel even more sorry for Aragorn for what Legolas will do to him. . .Haha!
Can't wait till the next part and other story updates!
| Aimme chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
I agree with your other reviewers, Cal! You need to write more to it, explain why he was shooting Kingfishers! Oh, those poor birds! (I have studied about them. I love those kinds of birds!) Yes, you need to write more to it!
I read this and had to say something about you writing more! But you know... You need to write and post more to Apostate's Ruse, I do believe would be the popular opinion. I have had to run away from a few angry readers that are trying to weasel spoilers out of me. XD Okay, so they weren't angry exactly, but you know what I mean.
There were a few typos, if you would like me to show you them... You know that is what I am here for. To beta stuff. :D
-Aimme (more commonly known as Raina)-
| StarLight9 chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
:D Very enjoyable to read, Cal! I would love to read more. I'm wondering why Legolas was killing kingfishers, he wouldn't purposefully kill a living creature without a good reason. It would be interesting to find out.
| CrazyAboutTheEldar chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
What? Why was Legolas shooting kingfishers? I don't get it.
This is pretty well written. Few typos here and there. On the humor scale, it's okay. Not great, but not terrible either. I smiled.
I'm not sure it really works as a serious humor piece, or that the characters are in character completely. Since this seems to have been written for a challenge and is supposed to be a humor piece, I will go easy on you.
rating 6/10 for not bad!
Mae carant! Galu a teithad vain!
| fair rider chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
Well that sounds like a story in itself.
Great little story mellon nin. :D
| Nieriel Raina chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
Ok, cute, but I am confused as to why Legolas would be killing kingfishers. You need to write the prologue! *evil grin*
| LexraHeart chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
what are kingfishers?
| Gord and V chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
I would love to see this be more then one chapter. Why would Legolas shoot a bird though? Very funny and a great laugh.
Peace out boy scout,
Gord and V
| SivanShemesh chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
I think that you should write more, though i'm pity Legolas right now... poor elf, what are you doing to my elf?
Love it. Thank you for writing it. Pleasureable piece to read.
*Hugs and Kisses*
Have a great day/night and keep smiling,